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A Beauteous Sight - Hybronnet

My eyes, they beheld A Beauteous Sight, Before my eyes, it did shine like the sun. I did see such beauty within the light, Tonight, passion’s fulfilment would be done. A woman did stand on Heaven’s bright plain, Her temple praised by the Angels on high. I knew Love it would forever remain, When I did leave this glory in the sky. Where you did stand, it was as bright as day, Your glory, I did not know I would find. But there you did stand, there you did stay, A beautiful light held within my mind. Now all around us, everything was still, As now your sweetest dreams I would fulfil. 11/01/2019.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/17/2019 6:19:00 PM

I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/15/2019 1:06:00 PM

Such a beautiful love poem, Mr. V! You surely have the poetic heart of a Romantic soul. Impeccably worded pure poetry. Love and best wishes for the new year.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/16/2019 8:45:00 AM

Hi Freddie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Hybronnet, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked piece. This is the first Hybronnet I have done. Trying different forms in my Valentine's collection. Best wishes for the New Year my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2019 3:10:00 PM

A lovely poem filled with bright hopeful imagery Mike. I hope you are having a great night and a lovely weekend my friend! : ) xxoo

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 5:27:00 PM

Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am trying a few shorter forms to see if I can do them. My rose keeps singing Connie. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/11/2019 3:04:00 PM

really wondrous vision of a poem, vlad, sweetened by your affectionate words!... enjoyed!...huggs

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 5:01:00 PM

Hi Nette, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I usually write longer poems, I decided to try some shorter forms just to see if the love could still sing. I always enjoy letting the heart sing. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/11/2019 8:03:00 AM

What a beautiful sight you describe so lovingly my friend..a glorious vision..and sensuous encounter.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 2:01:00 PM

Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece my friend. A beauteous sight does fill my vision and the heart sings simply. Another try at a shorter form. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.