Lin Lane Poet Limerick

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     Bawdy or Funny Limerick Contest

July 30, 2023       Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

A Bawdy Limerick Failure

Tried to write a limerick that's bawdy
The naughty kind that sex would embody
With each attempt I failed
While another prevailed
Compared to Jan's, mine was just plain shoddy

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Linda Alice Fowler August 21, 2023 at 9:11 AM LOL. The fun of friendly competition! Congratulations Lin! You do just fine. :)

Janice Canerdy August 18, 2023 at 8:22 PM A clever approach, Lin! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Tania Kitchin August 18, 2023 at 1:56 PM Lin, cute and clever, congratulations on your first place win! Hugs Lin Lane August 18, 2023 at 1:59 PM I am so thrilled with my first place from you, Tania. It wasn't easy to keep from telling Jan what I'd written, but the fun was waiting for her to react to it. Thanks so much sponsoring your creative contests. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith August 18, 2023 at 1:15 PM Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading your creative/cute Limerick write again. Have a great day/weekend............ Lin Lane August 18, 2023 at 1:57 PM Thanks so much for liking this one, Paula.

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2023 at 1:45 PM Fun way to express frustration. It's hard for me to think of bawdy themes Lin Lane August 2, 2023 at 9:09 AM Andrea, I'm going to blame Jan for the limericks I write. She's brought me over to the smelly side of toilet humor.

Eileen Manassian July 31, 2023 at 2:04 AM Jan does seem to have the edge on that. This is a great write about the attempt and has great flow. :) Lin Lane August 2, 2023 at 9:08 AM I'll not rumble with Jan in the ring about limericks. Her punch would knock me out. Thanks, Eileen and it's nice to see you!

Paula Goldsmith July 30, 2023 at 12:24 PM A creative/cute Limerick write. I enjoyed it. "Good Luck" Have a great day/week............. Lin Lane August 2, 2023 at 9:07 AM Thanks, Paula. I'll always bow to the limerick prowess of Jan.

Suzette Richards July 30, 2023 at 10:45 AM I love the repartee between you and Jan. A comic gold :) Lin Lane July 30, 2023 at 10:49 AM Thanks. Jan and I go all the way back to day 1 of me entering the kitchen. Tania is also my poetic sister. Hugs to both of them.

David Kavanagh July 30, 2023 at 9:57 AM Not shoddy at all Lin, great bawdy sense of humour shown here between you two, good clean fun and banter going on too lol! cheers David Lin Lane July 30, 2023 at 10:08 AM Thank you, David. Jan and I have had sort of a sisterhood relationship from way back when I first joined. I'm pleased you like my idea of 'not so bawdy' but fun in this one.

Joanna Daniel July 30, 2023 at 9:08 AM Wonderful, Lin! Lin Lane July 30, 2023 at 9:14 AM Thanks for reading and commenting, Jo.

Jan Allison July 30, 2023 at 8:42 AM hahaha and you hadn't even read mine lol this is priceless in so many ways Lin lol:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane July 30, 2023 at 8:43 AM I had to do it, and without you knowing!