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A Baptism of Brigid

In the assure abyss of the Dead Sea, where the salt laden waves danced with a sapphire sparkle, ancient legends converged with modern marvels, A lady in white shimmered across the saline surface, a conduit of healing energy. Clad in a robe woven from the threads of serenity, as delicate as a water lily, Her swan like graceful movements captivate, Leaving impressions of ripples that trace on the mirror salt crystals surface, She embodied the core of the sea’s curative powers. She drew upon the mineral rich waters to heal the besmirched blemishes on her virtuous silken skin, restoring a rhapsody of rejuvenation, Alleviating not only herself but all who dipped their toes into the depths of the sea’s vast expanse, Her gentle touch brought solace to weary souls and worn bodies, dissolving their burdens as brine tears caress the shore, Waves and heartbeats pulse in unison, connecting with the easing energy that flowed through their aqueous realm. She is the facilitator of transformative splendour, A symbol of health and revitalisation, She is a true miracle of the healing properties that lie within the depths of the Dead Sea.

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Date: 10/14/2023 2:24:00 PM
a somewhat mystical and magical poem. I loved the 'assure abyss of the Dead Sea.' You sent a wonderful tone with your words and images. You showed your true magical talent with this one...enjoy your day, Sara
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Billie Jama
Date: 10/16/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Sara
Date: 10/14/2023 6:49:00 AM
True miracle of healing! What a magical write this is! The way you’ve painted imagery is captivating and so eloquent, absolutely gorgeous, i love your use of gems and various elements of nature , and as i read this my heart was full and i couldnt help but be in awe! The beauty that emanates through poetic verses truly is profound! Brilliant write this is! Deeply moving
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Billie Jama
Date: 10/16/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Sis.

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