A Baby Wails

This poem it just so beautiful, in 3 short lines, you described the miracle of birth and congratulations on your win, very well deserved indeed~~

I love this haiku. I read it earlier before the contest was judged, and loved it then. I love it more now. Especially your second line. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Very deserved. Love, Deb

Congratulations John, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

Very interesting haiku, john. And congratulations on your big win! LUv, Andrea

wonderfu entry, congrats on your win in the contest John

oh john.. a supreme piece! CONGRATS on the big win..:) huggs, nette

So happy to see your poem get its well-deserved recognition, John. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Hi John - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Such a wonderful metaphor!! Congratulatiions, John!!

Congrats Moses on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest... awesome win my friend..luv..

Beautiful John, I had two and this describes the process so well, the pain leaves once that wail is heard, such joy.

A beautiful description of the birthing process, John. Perfect form as Charles requested. Hoping to see your poem in the winners' circle! Love, Carolyn

A birth is always a winner to me. A beautiful Haiku. Good luck on the contest. God Bless Phyl

Beautiful haiku. Not one unnecessary word. And beautiful flow and phrasing. Best wishes in the contest. I expect this will do quite well. Thank you, John, for your recent comments on my writing. I appreciate so much your words of support. I'm glad you liked my haikus. Take care. Deb

This one looks just as good as any other haiku I have seen lately. Good work here.

Good one..New life should be a winner..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Chiropractor did my neck and I came home and slept two hours..I have not had a good night's sleep for awhile now..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

i'll have to look at the rules. and i'll get back. jhl

Awesome .. Moses a perfect picture painted with your precious words my friend.. good luck in the new contest... wonderful title too..

Very creative haiku with very apt nimages, John

Dear Mr.Freeman , can you my prize in the cotests.. and hol to get it ? Receive congratulations,but it do not know why? Please explain to me ? Thank you for attention ! Lawyer: Natalia Georgieva

Very nice Haiku...Good luck in the contest...Thank you for my win in your contest...Jimmy

Very creative, John. I think Charles wants a total of 15 syllables in his haiku entries. I wouldn't want you to miss out, so you might want to review his rules. I really like the concept here. Best to you, Diane