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A Poetic Conscience

Dan Cwiak - Dedicated to *** Constance *** The Rambling Poet's work titled: Throbbing With Life In thinking of a contest poem with ~~~ RULES ~~~ Consideration must be given to them, Or the poetry written will not fit Under their *** UMBRELLA *** Lonely, the poet feels encumbered by Doing his work for such a ~~~ CONTEST ~~~ Nothing else can upset the delicate balance Of words, rhyme, and *** METER *** To enter a contest is a challenge For any poet to attempt ~~~ YET ~~~ In so far as subscribing to the rules Necessary, he must make the effort with Devotion, thought, and ***STRONG WILL *** This is the strength of the poet's Heart as a writer and wordsmith, Endeavoring to complete his ~~~ TASK ~~~ When I try to write something clever Or get on with my writing as a *** QUEST *** Rigid are the thoughts that cross my mind, Descriptive are those that only ~~~ ESCAPE ~~~ Such that I am mindful of the burden laid upon me. To some, it may come easily to their *** BEING *** Others, like me, have a more difficult task as the Disharmony of thoughts, words, and feelings Evolve into an imperfect type of ~~~ PERFECTION ~~~ Very often, the expressions are only those Of the emotional guilt I may have for the subject. Too often, however, I begin to use *** Poetic License *** Even though, I should not take that liberty. To those who can claim the poet's glib words, Or the gift that they have, often proceed to ~~~ GIVE ~~~ Yet, such is my life as poet. Such is the ~~~ CONSCIENCE ~~~ Of my soul. Oh, but to shed myself of these thoughts, Under the banner of the poetry that I *** WRITE ***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/31/2010 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Daniel. Great job! JA
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Date: 8/26/2010 9:59:00 PM
congratulations, Daniel, I think you came up with some great thoughts in the development of this one. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/25/2010 9:02:00 AM
Mmm...I suppose I would have to see these "rules" to rate this any higher, but two things stand out...I assume the words sectioned off by ~~~ and *** had to be included, but the symbols are a little distracting. And the second thing is that the I Could Not Find The Words To Devote To You does not match your title Throbbing With Life. Thought the rules of Acrostic means that this really isn't an Acrostic, but something similar. Probably just me, though. Thanks for the comment on my poem.
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest with this masterful and theological piece,,well done,,and I truly want to Thank you for the words that you left behind upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Daniel in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "What Are The Rules Again? ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2010 3:32:00 PM
This was quite a challenge Daniel, and you responded with a masterpiece. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2010 1:44:00 PM
Clever work. congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:57:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem..clever presentation with the end words...BG
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congrats Dan on your number one poem in the 'rules' contest.. am married officially as of right now.. ciao ..with luv...
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