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A Childs Wreath

A child, I remember the door decorated by a fir circle, Circle that it was, it always was fresh and new. New as the season, new to accent this place. Place now the wreath, the circle of green, Green to remind us of a coming Spring. Spring, when the snow is swept away by water, Water which proclaims our baptism in the Lord. Lord of All, Bethlehem's wreath of promise...brought to us by A Child.

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Date: 1/6/2011 1:17:00 AM
got cross-eyed, DANIEL.. oooh, sorry friend.. :)
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Date: 1/6/2011 1:15:00 AM
francine, well-derved win in the contest.KUDOS!! :) nette
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2011 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dan C in the "Christmas Wreath" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2011 8:25:00 AM
Hi . Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Eamon
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Date: 1/4/2011 10:09:00 PM
Many Congrats Daniel for clinching big win spot in this difficult yet interesting form of Dr Rams contest. Best wishes/Luv...Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:06:00 AM
Wow Dan, I love the message here especially the last two lines.. Congratulations to you, love Wilma
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:48:00 PM
Yours is really nice, daniel, the form and the message, I much enjoyed. Congratulations. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/3/2011 7:25:00 PM
Very beautiful. Congratulations on your top ten win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:46:00 PM
Lord of All, Bethlehem's wreath of promise...brought to us by A Child. Yes indeed a promise of eternal life paid for by the ordeal of the cross. Congratulations Daniel on your worthy poem's place in honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:36:00 PM
Big congratulations to you, dear friend. This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:08:00 PM
Congrats Dan on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's wreath contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy your top ten success tonight with luv..
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:06:00 PM
Very, very nice...congrats to you for your success in the contest. Bg
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Daniel, on the tenth place win inb my contest.
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Date: 12/21/2010 8:22:00 AM
What a very inspiring poem for Dr. Ram's contest, Dan! Really enjoyed how you made this flow-- very nicely done! As for the leche flan recipe-- sending it to you via soupmail though I have a feeling it will be in installments, bear with me please ;) -- have a wonderful Christmas! -- nikko :)
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Date: 12/21/2010 6:05:00 AM
Very interesting..coming around!!! Light & Love and thanks so much for the congrad's Happy Holy Days
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:20:00 PM
I REALLY like your inspirational approach to the contest, Daniel. This deserves to be in the winners' circle. Good luck to you!
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Date: 12/20/2010 5:36:00 PM
Faithfully done, so much to reflect on your message here, Daniel. Good luck to you on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/20/2010 3:29:00 PM
Oh this is wonderful. Perfect and beautiful. Each line speaks its own message. Wow, a great piece of writing.
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:26:00 PM
Very expressive entry Dan and full of special thoughts ... good luck in the contest by Dr. Ram.. with this rare beauty my friend ..enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 12/5/2010 1:50:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Daniel
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Date: 12/5/2010 1:44:00 PM
Good one ...Enjoyed the expressiveness of this work..Testimony of your faith for sure..I am glad that you stopped by and commented on my work "Face To Face With Death"..Yes, this happened to me when I was much younger..I was going to work that day and met that airplane face to face on a two lane road..I was just glad that there was room for me to get over and for the pilot to move over some..He was still traveling fast when I met him..He had to emergency land..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2010 10:13:00 AM
wonderful. you met the challenge of this contest perfectly, good luck Daniel, you did a great job
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:59:00 AM
this has a rich, beautiful touch of spirituality with expreesive words to connect the whole piece together, daniel.. best of luck in the contest...warmest, nette
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