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A 9-11 Tale With Heart

A beautiful, perfect, autumn day it was. The gold and red sneaking in the Central Park leaves as it always does. I wanted to stay home with my wife and son. But realized there were bills to be paid and then some. So after my shower, breakfast and things, I just sipped on my cup of Joe, admiring our gold wedding rings. Our son Teddy was at our feet. I thanked God for us three, at our cozy family meet. . Alas, too soon would I have to go. I kissed Mary and Teddy and told them, I loved them so! Ah, the day was so perfect chiseled by God's own making. I sat on the lone bench to thank Him for His Glorious undertaking. . I grabbed by attaché case and off I went. To work in the great Twin Towers,where I know God wanted me sent. Everyone so happy that day, some even spoke of Christmas? Though it was months away,I was grateful to God for all of my life! Especially my beautiful son and stunning wife. Of course you all know what happened next. Hell broke out and we all did our best, to return safely to our earthly nest. It was not to be for me! The smoke thick and heavy overcame me so rapidly. I clutched my cross and begged God to take me home. I awoke, and the air was beautiful and clear. You know I already missed my son and wife so very dear, But I was being beckoned to gates of gold. And I knew the Bible well, I knew what it foretold. And yes, the Gates of Heaven swung open widely for me. Now the real journey of my life, was just beginning for me! . Dedicated: To all those lost on 9/11, when evil people did something evil to hurt so many. February 24, 2020 3:30pm PST

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Date: 2/25/2020 12:09:00 PM
Oh Panagiota, such a truly heartbreaking poem, so well written and capturing so much emotion it brought tears to my eyes, as if it was only yesterday when those horrific images were beamed across the world after such an evil and cowardly act of terrorism that truly shocked the world. You poem is amazing dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/25/2020 12:21:00 PM
Fear was in the USA for quite a while. People in NYC went into therapy after that. I recorded hours and hours for days, I wanted to go and help. It was wonderful to see the world weeping for us. Such love! Thank you.....I wrote this lat year but forgot to post it....love you Ann! Panagiota. I love the UK as well.))))
Date: 2/25/2020 9:55:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your verse this morning, Panagiota, placing yourself as one of the victims that died that day. You captured the imagery and deep emotions that went on that heartfelt day. An intense time of crisis that shouldn't have happened inside the twin towers. How could that had happened to hijack a plane. Thank you for sharing. Eve
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/25/2020 10:43:00 AM
Eve, dear! What a thoughtful response. Who can forget the heartbreak and hollowness of that day? It was a well-planned attack. We had been warned before W was president, but previous resident of White House refused to do a thing with Bin-Laden. How do you sleep with all those deaths under your pillow? We cannot bring the dead back. We can only face evil today and stomp it out. No hesitation. Thank you. Panagiota xx
Date: 2/25/2020 7:17:00 AM
NOTE: from poet. Just dawned on me that none of the first responders to ths poem is a United States citizen. Go Canada, Australia and the UK.! God bless you and your three great countries. You were not here on 9/11 but you Comprehend the impact, I heartily thank you. Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:06:00 AM
A sad day for mankind Panagiota, the world watched in horror as people of different nationalities and religions lost their lives. May those who committed that atrocity rot in hell. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/25/2020 5:35:00 AM
Good morning Tom! Sadly, those who love Palestine and hate Jews infected our Congress. Rep.Omar who married her own brother to get here needs removal. Here's her interpretation of 9/11: "someone did something to someone!" she and her ilk would kill and insult anyone. She's more than happy to get a FAT paycheck from American taxes. And a leader of the rabble rousers in Congress. Panagiota xx congrats on being responder #3.. So many nations were represented-(( Panagiota #3. And this is an international site?
Date: 2/24/2020 9:20:00 PM
Hello Panagiota … the world should never be allowed to forget what happened that day, but many become complacent and take their eye off the ball. Thank God for our protectors in the background - catch you soon Panagiota - Lindsay
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/25/2020 5:16:00 AM
My dearest Lindsay~ every year and during 9/11 they play replays of that day. I see it. It still seems like a new event. You should look on you tube and take a tour of the WTC Memorial. My daughter went to NYC. She cried during the entire tour. Seeing all those pictures of those who perished, parts of the WTC, recordings did her in. And you ARE right. Look at the paltry responses to this powerful poem. You,are number 2? What is it about we poets and reality. We are drunk on Muses, butterflies and meatloaf and kisses? I tell you, this world is going to hell fast. They don't want to remember the Holocaust either. Love from the USA, Panagiota xxx
Date: 2/24/2020 5:44:00 PM
Hello Paganotia, a lovely tribute to those that lost loved ones on 911. Have a nice evening my friend, Hugs Darlene xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2020 12:27:00 PM
You made a great comment on Lindsay's comment.I agree with you. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2020 12:23:00 PM
Hello Panagita, this incident had a great impact on me. It made me sick in my stomach. innocent people being killed.. for what reason, it made no sense to me at all. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/24/2020 5:59:00 PM
Hello and a big thank you, Darlene. What a day in history this was ~that harmed so many of all colors and creeds. And now the offspring of these killers are in the USA Congress, furthering Their demands to destroy the USA. It's an utter disgrace....Panagiota xx

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