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Caution

Don't transfix me with a gaze that shakes my complacency and threatens to resurrect feelings I let die--actually bludgeoned to death— eons ago. Don't speak to me in that seductive tone, reminding me that I am flesh, not a well-oiled machine. Don't touch me with demanding hands that seek the warmth and fulfillment I can't, or won't, provide. A final warning: If you must try to summon forth a dead or dormant thing, do so not simply for the challenge of conquest. Awakened things must be nurtured. Posted October 16, 2017 October 29, 2018, entered in Julia Ward's contest--Favorite Free Verse from October or November 2017 Entered in Brian Strand's Contest

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Date: 11/9/2018 8:56:00 PM
Powerful words arousing thoughts and memories, I might prefer to forget. Well written, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/9/2018 10:09:00 PM
I know what you mean, Geoffrey. Thanks so much for your comment! Janice
Date: 11/3/2018 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/3/2018 10:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 10/22/2017 1:55:00 PM
Great advice to men that have not learned, to be kind, gentle and truly sincere in their loving.. I love both the depth and wisdom this gem displays my friend! A fav....
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/22/2017 8:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for this encouraging comment, Robert! Janice
Date: 10/16/2017 10:31:00 PM
This is really good Janice, not just for conquest, a good warning to foolish men! Hope this does well in the contest!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, John! Janice
Date: 10/16/2017 4:24:00 PM
So many apt warnings ---very well done, Janice--the heart awakens!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2017 9:42:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay! Janice
Date: 10/16/2017 4:23:00 PM
You really went to work fast on her contest theme. How well said, and that last line of is the point of it all! I really like this, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2017 9:42:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice

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