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To Live a Long Long Time

When I was young, I thought my life to be a story book: a bean stalk I would climb with treasures at the top at last to see. How sweet to get to live a long long time. Along the way, some things were hard; some great! I liked especially when I reached my prime. Though “good old days” can quickly dissipate, how sweet to get to live a long long time. Oh, to go back, knowing what one learns from past mistakes (for youth’s a misspent crime!) but round and round and round this big world turns. How sweet to get to live a long long time. Time brought old age to me, and pain came too. How weary I am growing of it. I’m amazed I once believed this to be true: How sweet to get to live a long long time. May 26, 2021 for Brian Strand's All Yours (Jun 17) Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/18/2021 6:14:00 AM
Congrats for a fine win, and as is an eighty-year-old's privilege, may you long live, dear poet....and continue to bit me at the finishing line, haha
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Date: 6/18/2021 3:51:00 AM
Beautifully written Andrea.....Hugs, Shonima.
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Date: 6/18/2021 2:34:00 AM
Beautiful Poem Andrea <3
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Date: 5/31/2021 8:25:00 AM
How bittersweet. A whole journey... :)
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Date: 5/28/2021 6:19:00 AM
Nice one, congratulations, Andrea:)
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Date: 5/26/2021 11:03:00 PM
Wonderful wish.
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:35:00 PM
May sweet savours of life match the quality of your poetry and bring long lasting contentment, Andrea.
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Date: 5/26/2021 1:38:00 PM
Such a fine write Andrea, so well put together and indeed you paint such a vivid and real picture of life when we get old. Blessings are yours always, Gordon
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Date: 5/26/2021 11:27:00 AM
"for youth's a misspent crime" Great line.
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Date: 5/26/2021 10:33:00 AM
Superb flow in writing, Andrea. I loved the repeated line which emphasized your theme again and again. So true the message. Good writing!
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Date: 5/26/2021 10:19:00 AM
I like the rhythm of your repeating line, Andrea. Always a blessing to live a long time in good health.
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Date: 5/26/2021 9:58:00 AM
Remarkable write, Andrea. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:47:00 AM
true - yes, time wears on the best of the best too - your refraining line made me think of the Lord of the Rings where Arwen gives up her long Elvish life for a short human one :)
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:23:00 AM
Time is determined by God. We die when we must. So be prepared and repent the past.
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:16:00 AM
So awesome. Love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/26/2021 6:42:00 AM
Enjoyed your verse Andrea, when we were young we thought we'd live forever but how quickly time marches on. Best of luck in the contest Tom
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