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Drawing: Arbor Day Foundation

Sometimes, close families can fall apart; too hard to understand in hindsight's view- when growing up together bound each heart. As cousins, we were playmates, tight and true- and born to sisters who were dear and kind. But bonds began to break down as we grew. In time, we moved away- they stayed behind, and distance fed the gap to widen more- until the silence 'tween us was resigned. Now, strangers to those who we did adore, we cherish photos of that precious spell when life was simple, fed by good rapport. Though other branches on our tree hang well- heartbreak about this lost one- can't dispel. July 12, 2022 Premiere Contest: Five Stanza Terza Rima Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

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Date: 7/18/2022 7:42:00 AM
This flows so freely and truly. It is perfect form and perfect flow. A true contender Sandra! Linda
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/18/2022 4:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Linda, with your very uplifting comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 7/16/2022 4:36:00 AM
Your form is precise, and your story is very well told.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/18/2022 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Jenna, for your encouraging comments! Sandra
Date: 7/12/2022 7:16:00 PM
My mother lived to be 96 and cherished every moment she spent with her six brothers and three sisters until their dying day. I have never seen another close-knit family like that one! Aloha!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/18/2022 4:49:00 PM
Rico, your family was very blessed! Thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem. Sandra

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