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Spring 8 by 5

I love pretty spring, flowers it will bring, now I want to sing. Colors flowers wear, in cool spring day air. Pretty is my yard, looking like a card, fence will be a guard. I really see, a big yellow bee, it's looking at me. Look a butterfly, flying real high, is he saying hi? The red ladybug, I want a big hug.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/21/2025 2:23:00 PM

Spring and fresh flowers, with the bees and butterflies are so pleasant to read about in this charming poem. Love it!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/22/2025 7:18:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you Love my fun "Spring 8 by 5" write. I love flowers but No garden here. So Sad... Only some fake pretty flowers that I love. Spring is fresh flowers, bees, butterflies and some pretty pink roses for me. Spring is a pretty time of the year. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/15/2025 10:52:00 AM

Knowing how much you love flowers, I can only imagine how beautiful your garden is, Paula! This poem is utterly charming with its flowers, birds, bees, butterflies and lady bugs! Definitely an invitation to sit with you and enjoy your garden. Thanks for your poetic moment of respite. Blessings and a "big hug" coming your way! Hope you had a wonderful Valentine's Day!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2025 11:09:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring 8 by 5" write. Yes, I love flowers but No garden here. So Sad... Only some fake pretty flowers that I love. Yes, some pretty pink roses. My Valentine's Day was nice. Hope you had a great day. Spring is a pretty time of the year. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/14/2025 10:52:00 AM

Cute rhyming Paula, made me smile :) good luck with the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2025 9:05:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck with the contest. Glad you found my "Spring 8 by 5" write to have, Cute rhyming. Also glad it made you smile. That makes me happy. "Smile" I love springtime. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Valsa George

Date: 2/12/2025 10:20:00 PM

Such a cute and lovely poem with its unlabored flow! A great entry for the contest. All the Best , dear Paula. Love and hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2025 12:21:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing and for All the Best. Glad you found my "Spring 8 by 5" write to be, a cute and lovely poem with its unlabored flow. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. I love springtime. Hugs back to you. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/12/2025 6:56:00 PM

Cute, absolute cuteness Hugs your poem! Thank you for commenting on my poem "Loved by You." Keep the cute inked vibrations coming, the world needs them ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2025 12:18:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring 8 by 5" write. Spring is a pretty and cute time of the year. Hugs to you... Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Terry Miller

Date: 2/12/2025 2:22:00 AM

Hugs to you and good luck in the contest it is a great entry, lovely flow

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2025 12:15:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck in the contest. Glad you found my "Spring 8 by 5" write to have, lovely flow. I love spring. It will be here very soon. Hugs back to you. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Ink Empress

Date: 2/12/2025 1:24:00 AM

Dear paula, what a cute and creative take on this form and how youv rhymed and made your lines flow is seamless and beautiful! I love the way youv ended the poem. Sweet as always. Pleasure reading your poem. Best wishes. Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2025 12:13:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my "Spring 8 by 5" write to be, cute and creative. I love spring. It will be here soon. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/11/2025 7:38:00 PM

spring flowers to you dear poet, your pristine thoughts brings cheer and positive feeling. your thought of butterfly saying 'hi' is so pretty, cute. Thank you for this refreshing write dear friend. BIG HUGS!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2025 12:11:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring 8 by 5" write. Spring is a pretty time of the year. Oh yes, flowers with butterflies saying 'hi' as they fly by. I love spring. Big hugs back to you. Think Spring As You Write Away.........

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/11/2025 1:52:00 PM

Uplifting and lyrical, Paula. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2025 12:07:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Spring 8 by 5" write to be, Uplifting and lyrical. Spring will be here before we know it. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2025 10:59:00 AM

Sending you that hug!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2025 12:06:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing and for your hug. Hugs are great to give and to get. Thanks.... I love spring. Hugs To You... Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Ann Peck

Date: 2/11/2025 8:08:00 AM

I love your poem, Paula. It's so full of Spring's cheer. Good luck!.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/11/2025 9:02:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good luck. Glad you Love my fun "Spring 8 by 5" write. Spring is a pretty/great time of the year. It will be here soon. I love spring time. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

John Read

Date: 2/11/2025 7:42:00 AM

It's so cold in London can't wait for spring to pay a visit, wish you well in the contest Paula. xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/11/2025 9:00:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing and for your wish in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring 8 by 5" write. Spring is a pretty time of the year. It will be here soon. Hooray!!! Stay warm... I love spring. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/11/2025 6:52:00 AM

The season we all look forward to Paula, it can't come quick enough. Best of luck in the contest and I hope your week is off to a good start. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/11/2025 8:56:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Best of luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring 8 by 5" write. Spring is on the way. Hooray!!! Hope you are OK... I love spring. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/11/2025 4:31:00 AM

Dear Paula, I love how your words radiate the simple joys of spring, its colors, its creatures, and its gentle warmth. I also loved the playful rhythm and childlike wonder that made it feel like a song, one that dances with bees and butterflies. Such a lovely, lighthearted embrace of the season! Winter (Soon to be Spring) Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/11/2025 8:54:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring 8 by 5" write. It was fun to bring to life. Spring in all of the beauty will be here before we know it. I love spring. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/11/2025 2:10:00 AM

Gardens and flowers make ideal poems. Yours is fantastic. I can hear the buzz.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/11/2025 8:50:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Spring 8 by 5" write to be, fantastic. You are so right when you say, Gardens and flowers make ideal poems. They sure do. Spring will be here before we know it. I love spring. Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/10/2025 2:32:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this. Lovely poem Paula! Hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/11/2025 8:48:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Spring 8 by 5" write to be a, Lovely poem. It was fun to write. Spring will be here soon. Are you getting snow??? Stay warm... I love spring. Hugs... Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2025 12:07:00 PM

- A joy to read ... you make me yearn for spring - (we are expecting snow this week) - Spring is a wonderful time :) - Best wishes in the contest with this lovely poem, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/10/2025 1:04:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Spring 8 by 5" write to be, A joy to read. WOW!!! You maybe getting snow??? I have not seen it in a couple of years. It is so pretty just a mess to clean up. Spring will be here before we know it. I love spring. Hugs... Think Spring As You Write Away...........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/10/2025 11:55:00 AM

Spring 8 by 5~Date written:2/10/2025~Written By Human Poet......