Rain

Roars of thunder echo Restless clouds colored grey Release liquid treasure Raindrops roll off rooftops Rippling in small puddles Raising water levels Recipe for flooding 4-15-2021 Pleiades R Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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David Mchattie

Date: 5/4/2021 6:40:00 PM

I've read several of the entries for this contest. Yours is the best . Well done. Have a great day my friend.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/25/2021 7:29:00 AM

very descriptive write, my friend

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/21/2021 6:47:00 PM

Dear Joseph, I love the rain, and your vibrant pen captures its essence with lovely finesse. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/21/2021 11:26:00 AM

I love this write Joseph, no fancy trimmings just a perfect poem for a recipe for flooding. I also want to thank you for my first place in the Tableau 2 contest, there has been so much going on here that I forgot to look and I was totally thrilled with the result, as I take nothing for granted, Hugs and blessings Joseph, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/20/2021 5:45:00 PM

Wow Joseph! You have included so much within this short form. I love the visuals in each line. They pop off the page. I am Faving this wonderful little gem! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2021 4:27:00 PM

A vividly descriptive, pleiades, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May
Date: 4/19/2021 8:19:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Kim

Marilene Evans

Date: 4/19/2021 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations, Joseph. Exceptional!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/16/2021 8:45:00 AM

Rapturous poetry, Roaring verses, Radiating imagery, my dear friend, Joseph. Blessings

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/15/2021 8:37:00 PM

I love everything about the rain, even a thunderstorm can be exciting. Raindrops softly falling, are a "liquid treasure" This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy