Rain

Roars of thunder echo
 Restless clouds colored grey
 Release liquid treasure
 Raindrops roll off rooftops
 Rippling in small puddles
 Raising water levels
 Recipe for flooding

 4-15-2021
 Pleiades R Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Kim Merryman
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Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 6:40 PM
I've read several of the entries for this contest. Yours is the best . Well done. Have a great day my friend.
Horne Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 7:29 AM
very descriptive write, my friend
Ashley Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Dear Joseph, I love the rain, and your vibrant pen captures its essence with lovely finesse. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Proxenos Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 11:26 AM
I love this write Joseph, no fancy trimmings just a perfect poem for a recipe for flooding. I also want to thank you for my first place in the Tableau 2 contest, there has been so much going on here that I forgot to look and I was totally thrilled with the result, as I take nothing for granted, Hugs and blessings Joseph, Jennifer.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 5:45 PM
Wow Joseph! You have included so much within this short form. I love the visuals in each line. They pop off the page. I am Faving this wonderful little gem! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
Merryman Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:27 PM
A vividly descriptive, pleiades, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
May Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 8:19 PM
Thank you for my placement Kim
Evans Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations, Joseph. Exceptional!!!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 8:45 AM
Rapturous poetry, Roaring verses, Radiating imagery, my dear friend, Joseph. Blessings
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:37 PM
I love everything about the rain, even a thunderstorm can be exciting. Raindrops softly falling, are a "liquid treasure" This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy
Sands Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 1:26 PM
I see the rippling puddles and the flooding. Great one :)
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 9:45 AM
I hear the echo of raindrops falling on rooftops. Well done, Joseph.
Daniel Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Wonderfully penned, rolling from your quill, Joseph:)
Buhagiar Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:05 AM
That's a mighty recipe for your Pleaides Best for a win.
Y. Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 7:31 AM
Hi Joseph, You used the letter R very well. I love the sound of the rain. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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