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At any rate Don't hesitate. Just concentrate, Wait for the gate To operate. Then trust in fate Anticipate. Race to dictate, Ride fast but straight Then dominate. Now change the gait, Accelerate. Timing it late To separate. Hearts palpitate, With hope then wait. While photos state You've won! that's great. Gesticulate, Now elevate The silver plate, And celebrate. 2/ 2/ 2018.

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Date: 2/13/2018 8:48:00 AM
Cleverly done, works like a gallop holding its breath. Short lines accelerate. Longer lines - a far worse fate.
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Date: 2/4/2018 5:46:00 PM
what a lovely message George and I love the rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2018 6:25:00 AM
I like the message in your monorhyme...it has an air of joy...All the best George
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Date: 2/2/2018 6:43:00 PM
Hi George, This is a good monorhyme with a great message. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/2/2018 5:31:00 PM
Hi George, hope you are well my friend.. Nice to see you posting... Great poem...
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