George Seal Poet Monorhyme

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At any rate
    Don't hesitate.
    Just concentrate,
    Wait for the gate
    To operate.
    Then trust in fate
    Anticipate.
    Race to dictate,
    Ride fast but straight
    Then dominate.
    Now change the gait,
    Accelerate.
    Timing it late
    To separate.
    Hearts palpitate,
    With hope then wait.
    While photos state
    You've won! that's great.
    Gesticulate,
    Now elevate
    The silver plate,
    And celebrate.
   
    


    2/ 2/ 2018.

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Emma Green February 13, 2018 at 8:48 AM Cleverly done, works like a gallop holding its breath. Short lines accelerate. Longer lines - a far worse fate.

Jan Allison February 4, 2018 at 5:46 PM what a lovely message George and I love the rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael February 3, 2018 at 6:25 AM I like the message in your monorhyme...it has an air of joy...All the best George

Alexis Y. February 2, 2018 at 6:43 PM Hi George, This is a good monorhyme with a great message. Well done:-) Alexis

Silent One February 2, 2018 at 5:31 PM Hi George, hope you are well my friend.. Nice to see you posting... Great poem...