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One Wrong Move

Life is a big mystery, trying everyday to unlock the key. People are striving for the living, Drinking and eating, Dreams not fulfilling. Vission towards success, Why everyone is depress? Innovation putting stress, Can anyone take some rest? Solomon once had spoken, "Life is like reaching on the wind." Material greatness, once you achieve Doesn't assure , forever you live. So what's the purpose, a child is asking. Temporal living, a successful career. Life is too short, full of wanderings. One wrong move, and its dead end. ** 7th Place Winner in PD's Contest : Any Poem #19 **

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2014 9:55:00 PM

very thoughtful writing. Glad to see it on the winner list. Congrats to you.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/21/2014 9:18:00 AM

Hi Andrea.. thank you dear for a kind comment!! .. :O))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2014 3:59:00 PM

Hello Aiyah, again :)... Congratulations.. thank you so much.. ... By the way I have something to say to all who supported my ANY POEM # 19 contest. Shame on me, Shame on me! Please forgive me, for not taking the time, to CONGRATULATE and adore all the winning poems for a second or third time. I AM VERY LATE:(-- I was a little mad at the world. However, this is my winning list, I will give everyone the same love and support. I'm dropping by with a Copy Paste note from the bottom of my heart. I am sorry, it's not like me, to walk away, as if nothing. Truly, I appreciate every winning poem, and HM. LOVE LINDA

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/21/2014 8:55:00 AM

Hi Linda... thank you dear for this overwhelming joy you brought to my heart !!! .. And thank you too for being so kind that you considered my poem as one on your winner's lists!! my pride~~~my happiness!!! THANKS A LOT!!!! so much huggssss!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/17/2014 6:09:00 AM

Material wealth cannot guarantee happiness; we need to work on other more important things that will eventually lead to eternal heights. // congrats on a very fine placing AiyaH. // paul

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/17/2014 7:07:00 AM

Thank you, Paul!! .. ;O)) we cannot buy happiness indeed.. ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/17/2014 2:57:00 AM

Very true ,, one wrong move can put u in a mess ,, Congrats on win Aiyah !

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/17/2014 7:06:00 AM

Thank you for a warm congratulations, Dr. Darma!! .. I'm honoured to be part of PD's winning lists..!! :O))

Peter Walsh

Date: 1/19/2014 4:50:00 AM

Food for thought Aiyah....well thought out :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/20/2014 8:15:00 AM

Thank you, PEter!! :))

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/14/2014 5:52:00 PM

Very true in its lines. We define how we live, how we walk, how we behave in the directions we take. Very well expressed.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/14/2014 5:57:00 PM

my dearest Drake,,, thank you for dropping by :)) it's an HONOR to see a comment of the "greatest DJ" in my poem ..^__^ huggs,AiyaH :))

Peter Walsh

Date: 1/14/2014 2:47:00 PM

Insightful stuff ...love poems that have you thinking...well done you

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/14/2014 5:58:00 PM

Peter.. thank you for the visit!! ..:)) i appreciate your comment ^__^

Michael Byte

Date: 1/14/2014 12:03:00 PM

Very inspirational writing. Yes we would like to be happy but as followers there will be griefs and suffering in our life's journey. All we can do is daily pray and ask him to guide our way.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/14/2014 12:09:00 PM

thank you for always giving my poem a great score...your comment is an inspiration..:))