Aiyah Torres Poet Free verse

One Wrong Move

Life is a  big mystery,
trying everyday to unlock the key.
People are striving for the living,
Drinking and eating,
Dreams not fulfilling.
Vission towards success,
Why everyone is depress?
Innovation putting stress,
Can anyone take some rest?
Solomon once had spoken,
"Life is like reaching on the wind."
Material greatness,
once you achieve
Doesn't assure ,
forever you live.
So what's the purpose,
a child is asking.
Temporal living,
a successful career.
Life is too short,
full of wanderings.
One wrong move,
and its dead end.



** 7th Place Winner in PD's Contest : Any Poem #19 **

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Andrea Dietrich April 19, 2014 at 9:55 PM very thoughtful writing. Glad to see it on the winner list. Congrats to you. Aiyah Torres April 21, 2014 at 9:18 AM Hi Andrea.. thank you dear for a kind comment!! .. :O))

Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2014 at 3:59 PM Hello Aiyah, again :)... Congratulations.. thank you so much.. ... By the way I have something to say to all who supported my ANY POEM # 19 contest. Shame on me, Shame on me! Please forgive me, for not taking the time, to CONGRATULATE and adore all the winning poems for a second or third time. I AM VERY LATE:(-- I was a little mad at the world. However, this is my winning list, I will give everyone the same love and support. I'm dropping by with a Copy Paste note from the bottom of my heart. I am sorry, it's not like me, to walk away, as if nothing. Truly, I appreciate every winning poem, and HM. LOVE LINDA Aiyah Torres April 21, 2014 at 8:55 AM Hi Linda... thank you dear for this overwhelming joy you brought to my heart !!! .. And thank you too for being so kind that you considered my poem as one on your winner's lists!! my pride~~~my happiness!!! THANKS A LOT!!!! so much huggssss!!!

Paul Callus April 17, 2014 at 6:09 AM Material wealth cannot guarantee happiness; we need to work on other more important things that will eventually lead to eternal heights. // congrats on a very fine placing AiyaH. // paul Aiyah Torres April 17, 2014 at 7:07 AM Thank you, Paul!! .. ;O)) we cannot buy happiness indeed.. ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 17, 2014 at 2:57 AM Very true ,, one wrong move can put u in a mess ,, Congrats on win Aiyah ! Aiyah Torres April 17, 2014 at 7:06 AM Thank you for a warm congratulations, Dr. Darma!! .. I'm honoured to be part of PD's winning lists..!! :O))

Peter Walsh January 19, 2014 at 4:50 AM Food for thought Aiyah....well thought out :) Aiyah Torres January 20, 2014 at 8:15 AM Thank you, PEter!! :))

Poet Tacito January 14, 2014 at 5:52 PM Very true in its lines. We define how we live, how we walk, how we behave in the directions we take. Very well expressed. Aiyah Torres January 14, 2014 at 5:57 PM my dearest Drake,,, thank you for dropping by :)) it's an HONOR to see a comment of the "greatest DJ" in my poem ..^__^ huggs,AiyaH :))

Peter Walsh January 14, 2014 at 2:47 PM Insightful stuff ...love poems that have you thinking...well done you Aiyah Torres January 14, 2014 at 5:58 PM Peter.. thank you for the visit!! ..:)) i appreciate your comment ^__^

Michael Byte January 14, 2014 at 12:03 PM Very inspirational writing. Yes we would like to be happy but as followers there will be griefs and suffering in our life's journey. All we can do is daily pray and ask him to guide our way. Aiyah Torres January 14, 2014 at 12:09 PM thank you for always giving my poem a great score...your comment is an inspiration..:))