November and December As Sisters

Behind October comes the gloomy one
arriving as the leaves are turning brown.
Though sometimes she blows in with a bright sun,
she’s often sulking in her fading gown.

She’s growing old and colder in the clime
where I reside, but how she changes mood
by stepping lively at Thanksgiving time
when families unite in gratitude.

December’s right behind her bringing joy,
for more festivities are bound to come.
Especially for every girl and boy
awaiting Santa, she is sure not glum!

Her gardens, dull now, which one time were green,
are covered by white flakes the heavens bring.
Fields shine in moonlight – lovely and pristine.
But snow will vanish with the warmth of spring.

December seems most popular of all
the sister months, for customs, songs, good food,
and lights galore bring thoughts at end of fall
of Christ the King and peace and brotherhood.

November 12, 2022
for Caren Krutsinger's the 'November or December Quatrain' Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 11/16/2022 3:32:00 PM
Good entry, Andrea. You covered a lot of thoughts for November and December. Have a fun week, my friend. Bill
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Date: 11/16/2022 5:01:00 AM
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Date: 11/13/2022 12:17:00 PM
Creative work comparing and contrasting the two months. Thanks for sharing this contest entry and for dropping by my blog. Sara
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Date: 11/13/2022 9:36:00 AM
a lovely piece that show that the aspirations aren't without merit. A merry Christmas, may joy and peace enrich you going forward.
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Date: 11/13/2022 3:47:00 AM
Andrea, a wonderful poem, love the imagery of the changing seasons!
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Date: 11/12/2022 10:46:00 PM
Love the usage- "sulking in her fading gown" ! Great poem Andrea ! Wish you all the Best!
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Date: 11/12/2022 8:15:00 PM
Yes it is so apt, that the festive season is in the middle of the dark days of winter, . Love the poetry, Andrea, and the journey you take the reader on.
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Date: 11/12/2022 7:27:00 PM
So that title is great, and its one I would have never thought of. Good luck!
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Date: 11/12/2022 12:11:00 PM
Doing the contest and got both November and December in. Love the use of simile and imagery of Fall and Winter, also love the rhyme of the lines. Awesome Sis.
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