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My Valentine Flame

Surrounded by the flame of my desire Amidst dancing shades of orange and blue My soul emits the warmth of a glowing fire My hearts energy still connected to you With purpose and passion We began our new life Not always in fashion You made me your wife There's been laughter and tears Throughout the many years Some conquered fear Others that steadfastly adhere I have seen how love can morph With nowhere else to go Emotions that dwindle and dwarf When couples refuse to grow If that should happen in our case I will always pray for grace That I may keep an attitude of nothing but sincere gratitude

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/5/2017 9:13:00 AM

I cannot believe no one has commented! This is beautiful, an enchanting and upbeat love richly delivered in each stanza. Love the content, the rhyme and the flow! Hugs ... CayCay

Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/5/2017 10:25:00 AM

No, not at all. It is the nature of Soup. People read, even favor or follow without making comments. I shall never understand it, but it happens to the majority of us. Some believe that to be read complete with comments, one must read and comment. That is what you must try. BUT never, ever believe it is anything you did, it is not about you, it is about SOUP. k? All the best ... CayCay

Donna Roberts
Date: 2/5/2017 9:24:00 AM

Wow, thanks Cay Cay..I was thinking maybe offensive??