Mr Sun Come Visit

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Mr. Sun, come, visit an earthly stay, sing a gay music phrase with your warm rays Send them my way with an extended stay Flutter round and run relays in a maze of cloudless baby blue want-tum long days Imprint your proud hugs and ascending blaze 4/13/2022 nursery rhymes

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Judy Ball

Date: 4/19/2022 8:13:00 PM

After the long winter we are all anxiously waiting for the warmth of the sun. Today is April 19 and although the snow was mostly gone we got some flurries this morning which turned into an all day snowfall that was wet and slushy. (sigh) Nice one Eve, God Bless, JB

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/19/2022 7:01:00 PM

I love those "cloudless baby blue" kind of days. I could linger in them, for always. This is so beautiful and uplifting, my dear friend. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/19/2022 5:39:00 AM

Outstanding Writing for the sun, my dearest friend, Eve! Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2022 4:16:00 AM

Ahhhh!! It has been cloudy and rainy here for a few days but today is supposed to sunny, but it is a little cool this morning. I saw a sliver of pale rose on the horizon earlier, so I believe it is going to be a sunny day. Your poem made me think about the fact that they say that up north they are going to get some more snow from this system that gave us the rain. Snow this late in April. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara