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Natureland — helycharlotte: By Daniel Paxton

When the winter melts Listen to the bells of spring - ... laughter in the throat Where my essence can find peace ... with flute playing in the trees 20.02.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Let the Pens Flow - Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas howmanysyllables.com - 5-7-5-7-7 1st place in the contest

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Date: 2/26/2020 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Short but wonderful. I love the flowers coming though the snow. Spring is on it way.....
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Date: 2/27/2020 1:20:00 PM
- Yesterday we had a hint of spring, Paula ... last night the snow came :) - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/26/2020 11:39:00 AM
Hi Sunshine Smile, my dear friend, congratulations on your winning poem - such a soothing write and totally heartfelt. Blessings, my dear friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/27/2020 1:18:00 PM
- Many thanks ... a pleasure to share with you, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/26/2020 9:03:00 AM
Hi Anne- Lise, I’m just coming back to congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/27/2020 1:17:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2020 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/27/2020 1:17:00 PM
- Thanks, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2020 6:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win Ann, beautiful write..
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Date: 2/27/2020 1:16:00 PM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2020 9:42:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and flow..Great win Anne..
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Date: 2/27/2020 1:15:00 PM
- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2020 12:23:00 PM
Nice one.
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:23:00 AM
- Many thanks Kai, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2020 9:35:00 AM
Lovely penning Anne-Lise, each line paints a picture so unique. Hugs and blessings,Gordon
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:25:00 AM
- The beauty of spring ... something to look forward to, Gordon :) - Many thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/23/2020 8:47:00 PM
beautifully penned Anne-Lise… this one came to life, the flute through the trees, perfect... hugs
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:23:00 AM
- A beautiful time we all long for, Sandra :) - Many thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/23/2020 2:46:00 PM
harmony in colours , signs of spring, nicely done, Sunshine. Good luck in the contest. Eve
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:22:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/23/2020 11:32:00 AM
Flute music makes me think of spring - this is delightful!
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:21:00 AM
- Spring comes with beautiful music, Michelle :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2020 7:06:00 PM
the flute playing was a nice touch at the end, harkening to spring !!
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:20:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2020 11:29:00 AM
This is a nice Tanka! Some wild plants have/had flowered here :) However, still about a month a head for formal spring. Enjoyed read. Have a good time dear Sunshine Smile.
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:19:00 AM
- Spring comes early after a mild winter here too, Abdullah :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2020 11:25:00 AM
WoW! Anne-Lise, This is just beautiful! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/25/2020 3:18:00 AM
- Spring is beautiful, Alexis :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2020 9:12:00 AM
Such beauty!
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Date: 2/24/2020 4:13:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2020 6:29:00 AM
Ah deary how happy you make me when you give me words of spring, and a photo to bring joy to my eyes. Thank you. Bessings all the way from TO, to Norway xo
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Date: 2/24/2020 4:13:00 AM
- Spring makes everyone happy, Pixie :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2020 4:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 2/22/2020 11:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/20/2020 4:14:00 PM
Your poem as beautiful as the flowers--amazing photo, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 2/21/2020 12:03:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/20/2020 2:23:00 PM
It's coming...Lovely imagery and feeling too
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Date: 2/21/2020 12:03:00 PM
- Arturo, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/20/2020 2:09:00 PM
The season that uplifts us Anne and can't come quick enough. Good luck Tom
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Date: 2/20/2020 2:12:00 PM
- A beautiful time ... I'm ready, Tom :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/20/2020 1:07:00 PM
this is beautiful, anne-lise!
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Date: 2/20/2020 2:07:00 PM
- So glad you liked it Ilene, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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