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Justice Take a Step Forward and Don T Look Back

Take a Step Forward and Don't Look Back Drama of lover’s fears and tears. I place my hands up to my ears, Roll my eyes, and walk away, Oh, why does it have to be this way? Why can't things ever change for us? ~ I take a deep breath And sneak out until the air clears. Into the comfort of my room And close the door Where I find tranquility And serenity of silence. I lay on my bed with a good book And open the door Entering a fantasy world of Medieval castles with Prince and Princess Courtly manners and courtly love, Knights with their codes of chivalry. Fire breathing dragons and magic fairies, Greek & Roman gods and goddesses. ~ You will never experience All that is wonderful If you keep focusing On the bad experience That’s behind you. ~ Where is the justice? ~ Take a step forward, Forget the evil of the past. Lay it all on a pyre And put it a flame And watch it all go up in flames. Just walk away And don't Look back. 8/25/2015

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Date: 9/16/2015 1:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem n deserved first place win Eve! Big Congrats!
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Date: 9/15/2015 4:00:00 PM
Congrats on the win ;-)
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Date: 9/15/2015 2:41:00 PM
Very powerful, Eve, and such good advice throughout and especially in your last stanza. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/15/2015 2:14:00 PM
Congrats Eve, wonderful poem. SKAT
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Date: 9/15/2015 1:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve. Have a bless day.
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Date: 9/15/2015 12:15:00 PM
words of wisdom indeed Eve many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2015 1:02:00 PM
Jan,thank you so very much. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/15/2015 11:32:00 AM
A very interesting piece. Congratulations on the win.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2015 1:03:00 PM
Thank you, Carol, so very much for your compliment and support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/15/2015 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations Eve on your well deserve win.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2015 1:04:00 PM
Michael,thank you so very much for your very inspiring comliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/15/2015 4:35:00 AM
A well earned position! Just love your write on Justice, Eve. Love
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2015 1:05:00 PM
Balveen,thank you so very much for your compliment and support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/14/2015 6:35:00 PM
This is wonderful!! I can see why Casarah chose this for the top spot. I love your description of opening the door/book, since I am prone to losing myself in a good book when I need an escape. And the last 5 lines say it all. Great job!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2015 1:06:00 PM
Thank you so very much,Heather, for your compliment and support.It's is so wonderful to escape to an adventure without leaving the house. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/14/2015 5:53:00 PM
This was fantastic, glad I got a chance to read it, and I hope many others do too! Thanks for entering my contest!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/14/2015 6:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Cas, you made my day.Hugs Eve
Date: 8/29/2015 7:31:00 PM
"Where is the justice...Take a step forward...Just walk away and don't look back." I love your poem, Eve! What words of wisdom. All the best for the contest! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/27/2015 4:10:00 AM
powerfully done Eve and good entry for the contest!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 8/26/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem. This is wonderfully penned for the contest, I think it is G R E A T ~~
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:34:00 AM
Eve my dear, I don't usually answer poems that have been entered in a contest, but I couldn't resist this one and I can relate to it, I cannot stand people arguing so I just casually walk out the door until it is all over, this in my mind is very well written, good luck in the contest,,,Take care.............Vera. SM
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