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citrine Indian summer sigh as blue skies turn a jealous green dusty weft wind and hours drew nigh idyllic of seasons has seen a wanderer of aged mirth, glean quintessence honey set awry underneath spun amorous scene of sweet scent tease, not a goodbye 1/20/2020 ABAB BABA 8 lines 8 syllables Poetry Contest: Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 2/16/2020 7:11:00 PM
Eve, your 45 well-crafted words paint quite of picture and tell a tale! Love your awesome words. Congrats to you ~ John
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Date: 2/16/2020 2:06:00 PM
Such a lovely write with great imagery, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Date: 2/15/2020 6:02:00 PM
Loved seeing this again on Brian's winner list. Congrats. I hope it does even better for placement with Charles.
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Date: 1/22/2020 4:48:00 PM
Well penned piece, good luck with the contest.
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Date: 1/21/2020 9:10:00 PM
This is beautiful; it brought September back to me in an instant; great imagery Eve.
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Date: 1/20/2020 3:06:00 PM
oh that glorious season. You did it justice. Awesome imagery, dear Eve.
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Date: 1/20/2020 9:37:00 AM
what a charming poem Eve, you did this challenge very well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2020 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and lovely tone and flow Eve--all the best.
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Date: 1/20/2020 3:43:00 AM
Really nice...a lovely creation
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Date: 1/20/2020 2:26:00 AM
A tongue twister in lay form.. Great entry in the contest Eve..
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Date: 1/20/2020 1:43:00 AM
This is very good Eve! It was more difficult to say quickly than I imagined. I think this will do great in the contest! xxoo
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