Eve Roper Poet Lay

Indian Summer Cl

citrine Indian summer sigh 
as blue skies turn a jealous green

dusty weft wind and hours drew nigh
idyllic of seasons has seen

a wanderer of aged mirth, glean
quintessence honey set awry

underneath spun amorous scene 
of sweet scent tease, not a goodbye

1/20/2020

ABAB BABA 8 lines 8 syllables
Poetry Contest: Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay 
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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John Watt February 16, 2020 at 7:11 PM Eve, your 45 well-crafted words paint quite of picture and tell a tale! Love your awesome words. Congrats to you ~ John

Charles Messina February 16, 2020 at 2:06 PM Such a lovely write with great imagery, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Charlie

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2020 at 6:02 PM Loved seeing this again on Brian's winner list. Congrats. I hope it does even better for placement with Charles.

M. L. Kiser January 22, 2020 at 4:48 PM Well penned piece, good luck with the contest.

Caren Krutsinger January 21, 2020 at 9:10 PM This is beautiful; it brought September back to me in an instant; great imagery Eve.

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2020 at 3:06 PM oh that glorious season. You did it justice. Awesome imagery, dear Eve.

Jan Allison January 20, 2020 at 9:37 AM what a charming poem Eve, you did this challenge very well:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit January 20, 2020 at 7:26 AM Beautiful imagery and lovely tone and flow Eve--all the best.

Arturo Michael January 20, 2020 at 3:43 AM Really nice...a lovely creation

Jenish Somadas January 20, 2020 at 2:26 AM A tongue twister in lay form.. Great entry in the contest Eve..

Connie Marcum Wong January 20, 2020 at 1:43 AM This is very good Eve! It was more difficult to say quickly than I imagined. I think this will do great in the contest! xxoo