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If My Love For You Was Greater

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if my love for you was any greater the trees would  line up in poetic forms ...awe you in sonnets written... ...part...to allow winds to cool your face...  to trace it with natures hand. all the oxygen that covers all the waters rise, supercharge the breath of my emotion. mountains would melt, shed their peaks like tears of joy. even the arid deserts serve up fruits,  their prickly pears peeled on a platter. sunset would pause and sunrise hurry... ...exist in a paradox to herald your presence. petals would climb their stems  regroup to bloom again. butterflies re-cocoon  emerge as glorious fairies  for all children to adore. the skies would willingly  shape, etch,  paint,   frame my exuberance. the planet would swell, the galaxies expand. in the endless depth  of my singular love  i hold you dear, safely contain you  in my admiring smile, for now, forevermore. 16~10~2014 Sponsor: Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Contest Name: Your Most Romantic Poem of 2014

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Date: 9/23/2018 6:00:00 PM
Wonderful as always.
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Date: 9/16/2018 8:45:00 PM
Revisiting this one because it showed up on the side bar and seeing it , I was reminded how it was your best poem and how much I loved it . How is the world treating you , ARmand? I hope all is well with you.
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Date: 2/28/2016 12:17:00 PM
Lovely poem.Could see your love in every line of the poem!
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Date: 3/8/2015 4:13:00 PM
this has now become your BEST poem at Soup, Armand and it so deserves that honor as the one most beloved by fellow poets. I adore it and would fave it again and again if I could. Just here to say hello and I miss you!
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Date: 1/23/2015 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations on winning once again with this lovely emotive piece. You deserved to, my friend!
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Date: 1/20/2015 8:16:00 AM
Powerful, well deserved win! Congrats, Maurice.
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Date: 1/20/2015 5:33:00 AM
A well deserved win, congrats, Maurice
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:14:00 PM
There ya go again, using one of your best poems in a best poem contest. hahaha, Now this is like my sixth or seventh time back here, and I gotta say, A VERY WELL deserved win. Truly one of the most very romantic poems I ever read.
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Date: 1/19/2015 10:56:00 PM
Oh thats so amazingly beautiful Maurice, perfect 7,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/19/2015 7:12:00 PM
Dear Maurice, this beautiful piece is such a wonderful reflection of the romantic that you are! Congratulations on a superb win! Pandita
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Date: 1/19/2015 4:27:00 PM
wow yet another win Armand this time in Guatami's contest - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 1/19/2015 2:24:00 PM
Great choice for one of your best Maurice, because it's one of my favourites of yours. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/18/2015 10:03:00 PM
An amazing expression of your undying love for her. Beautifully written, Armand! Congrats on the well deserved win!
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:11:00 AM
spectacular verse romancing the page.. radiant one, Maurice..big congrats!
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:37:00 AM
Simply superb in every line.. I can feel the surging transformation and magic within the lines that somehow flourish to anyone who feels love in its truest state.. :)! Such are amongst the most beautiful wonder love can ever do.. your words mark a double meaning the enhances the effect and imagery. :)! Only love can produce such sublime wonders:)! BIG BIG CONGRATULATIONS! a fave for me..!
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Date: 1/18/2015 8:11:00 AM
Im glad and humbled to be on the same place with this poem.. it's a wow for me...!
Date: 1/18/2015 12:45:00 AM
I have said it below, I am not surprised at this victory; congrats Armand...huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 11:07:00 PM
Armand.. The stars must have been shinning on you when you penned the romantic masterpiece.. Congrats on your incredible win!
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Date: 1/17/2015 4:12:00 PM
Oh my Armand, how incredibly romantic this poem is, and how happy I am to see it where it belongs, AT THE TOP! Big Congrats on your wonderful win my friend. Going straight into my fav's. #7
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Date: 1/17/2015 3:51:00 PM
ok Maurice you've convinced me you are the Master of Romance, congratulations on this win
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Date: 1/17/2015 3:02:00 PM
Hi Maurice. It is not too overstated to say in fact that this is "very poetic." Prediction!.... I see a 7 in your future... have a great week end. Earl
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:46:00 PM
I think this is one of my favourite ever of your writes Armand:-) Many congrats:-) love and hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:36:00 PM
Very nice, Maurice. Congrats. A well-deserved win.
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:39:00 AM
hmmm, I could not find it in my list, but when i clicked fave, it said previously added, so it must be on that list somewhere. Truly one of your best poems ever.
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:37:00 AM
now I think is my fifth time to see this one. BIG congrats on your very well deserved win. I will make sure this one got faved because if it didn't, I sure messed up!!!
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:03:00 AM
So beautiful, Armand. Such divine imagery that speaks of ultimate love! A heartfelt congratulations on your fine win! Sandra
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