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The Breadth of My Love

if my love for you was any greater the trees would line up in poetic forms ...awe you in sonnets written... ...part...to allow winds to cool your face... to trace it with nature’s hand. all the oxygen that covers all the waters rise, supercharge the breadth of my emotion. mountains would melt, shed their peaks like tears of joy. even the arid deserts serve up fruits, their prickly pears peeled on a platter. sunset would pause and sunrise hurry... ...exist in a paradox to herald your presence. petals would climb their stems regroup to bloom again. butterflies re-cocoon emerge as glorious fairies for all children to adore. the skies would willingly shape, etch, paint, frame my exuberance. the planet would swell, the galaxies expand. in the endless depth of my singular love i hold you dear, safely contain you in my admiring smile, for now, forevermore. 16~10~2014 Armand Hamouth
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Spence Sr Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 5:00 PM
Excellent poem, my brother of God's inspirational grace, Maurice. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The descriptive excellence is lovely. The theme is on point, and the tone moves your words with much grace. Great job! "The higher reality of consciousness enhances peace, love, harmony, and happiness in our hearts with actions we connectively and collectively accomplished through faith." –Professor, Ambassador, Dr. Joseph S. Spence Sr. USA (Epulaeryu Master)!
Castellenas Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 9:49 AM
Amazing and beautiful words for love. You made the feel the emotions and the love for another. I enjoyed the complete poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 6:22 PM
Hello Maurice Yvonne now that is what I call a deep love. Have a nice evening my friend.
Inman Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Wonderful as always.
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Revisiting this one because it showed up on the side bar and seeing it , I was reminded how it was your best poem and how much I loved it . How is the world treating you , ARmand? I hope all is well with you.
Vijan Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Lovely poem.Could see your love in every line of the poem!
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:13 PM
this has now become your BEST poem at Soup, Armand and it so deserves that honor as the one most beloved by fellow poets. I adore it and would fave it again and again if I could. Just here to say hello and I miss you!
Deschler Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 6:59 PM
Congratulations on winning once again with this lovely emotive piece. You deserved to, my friend!
Taylor Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Powerful, well deserved win! Congrats, Maurice.
Mehta Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 5:33 AM
A well deserved win, congrats, Maurice
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 11:14 PM
There ya go again, using one of your best poems in a best poem contest. hahaha, Now this is like my sixth or seventh time back here, and I gotta say, A VERY WELL deserved win. Truly one of the most very romantic poems I ever read.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Oh thats so amazingly beautiful Maurice, perfect 7,, congrats on big win!
Sietesantos Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 7:12 PM
Dear Maurice, this beautiful piece is such a wonderful reflection of the romantic that you are! Congratulations on a superb win! Pandita
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 4:27 PM
wow yet another win Armand this time in Guatami's contest - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan x
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Great choice for one of your best Maurice, because it's one of my favourites of yours. Congratulations on your win.
Deschler Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 10:03 PM
An amazing expression of your undying love for her. Beautifully written, Armand! Congrats on the well deserved win!
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:11 AM
spectacular verse romancing the page.. radiant one, Maurice..big congrats!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 3:37 AM
Simply superb in every line.. I can feel the surging transformation and magic within the lines that somehow flourish to anyone who feels love in its truest state.. :)! Such are amongst the most beautiful wonder love can ever do.. your words mark a double meaning the enhances the effect and imagery. :)! Only love can produce such sublime wonders:)! BIG BIG CONGRATULATIONS! a fave for me..!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Im glad and humbled to be on the same place with this poem.. it's a wow for me...!
Kayode Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 12:45 AM
I have said it below, I am not surprised at this victory; congrats Armand...huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Oh my Armand, how incredibly romantic this poem is, and how happy I am to see it where it belongs, AT THE TOP! Big Congrats on your wonderful win my friend. Going straight into my fav's. #7
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 3:51 PM
ok Maurice you've convinced me you are the Master of Romance, congratulations on this win
Schumacker Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Hi Maurice. It is not too overstated to say in fact that this is "very poetic." Prediction!.... I see a 7 in your future... have a great week end. Earl
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 12:46 PM
I think this is one of my favourite ever of your writes Armand:-) Many congrats:-) love and hugs Jan xxx
Mandani Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Very nice, Maurice. Congrats. A well-deserved win.
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:39 AM
hmmm, I could not find it in my list, but when i clicked fave, it said previously added, so it must be on that list somewhere. Truly one of your best poems ever.
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