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I Wish Somebody Would'Ve Told Me

About life and people, the pain and the hurt. I never dreamed in a world of love and beauty, pain and hurt would blossom like an evil flower. How can you say you are my friend, then stab me in the back. Jealousy only makes you turn mean, then you turn many shades of green. Your golden halo turns to solid tin, since your true self has come out. I am a peaceful person, asking for peace and love in my life. Guess asking is all I can do, in reality it will not always come true. Date Written:3/7/2023 "4 Place"

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/26/2023 9:00:00 AM

Nicely-done, Paula:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2023 1:23:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. It is an honor to have this win in your contest. Thanks for having it. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day....................................

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/24/2023 7:42:00 PM

Paula, many hearty congratulations on your Contest win! Spotless vibes you portray.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2023 1:21:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. Have a wonderful/blessed day..........

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/24/2023 11:22:00 AM

Well conveyed on pain and hurt of life. Congrats on your win, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2023 1:20:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. Too bad friendships turn into hurt/pain. So sad. Have a wonderful/blessed day..........

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 3/23/2023 7:21:00 PM

Exposing hypocrisy Well done poet. Congratulations on your win. Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2023 1:18:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. Friendships can turn into hurt/pain. So sad. Have a wonderful/blessed day..........

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/15/2023 2:13:00 PM

this is a very honest write. Some times friends do turn and mostly scape goat and take their angst out on others. I have a few of those long term ones and actually have to give them a "time out" some times. Try not to let others hurt you dear which is easier said than done. Best wishes.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/16/2023 8:55:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Friendships can turn into hurt/pain. I have also given them a "time out," many times more than one. I find it does not work. Time to let them go. So sad. Have a wonderful/blessed day...........

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 3/14/2023 10:04:00 AM

Such truth in what you said dear Paula... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 10:30:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, truth is here. Friendships can turn into hurt/pain. So sad. Hugs. Have a wonderful/blessed day...........

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/11/2023 9:22:00 PM

Sometimes we fall into friendship too easily. We trust a little too much, maybe out of kindness, maybe out of need,....but if the scales are tipping then you must heed. ... If its becoming one sided, ... then you must be guided,.. to ease off the friendship for a while, ... so you can continue to smile. Lovely Poem Paula. Very relatable.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 10:25:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. When the friendship turns to hurt/pain it is hard to smile. So sad but so true. I guess let them go is the best thing to do. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend...........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/11/2023 6:30:00 PM

Powerfully penned and put, Paula. Such a shame that people are too often two-faced. ~ Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 10:20:00 AM

Thanks for your note. You are so right. But why are people two-faced??? I think it gives them power. So wrong. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend...........

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/8/2023 9:09:00 PM

Very sad when hurtful things happen, Paula, your poem is quite reflective:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2023 6:19:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Yes, very sad write but true. I do not understand way people hurt people. They can, so they do. Guess it gives them power. I just had a very good friend stab me in the back. I guess people/friendships change. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend...........

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/7/2023 6:21:00 PM

It is as it is, not as we may wish it to be. Let not however, flame of our heart’s love diminish. I enjoyed your straightforward reflections, Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for your note. I am glad you enjoyed this write. I just had a very good friend stab me in the back. So the write came easy because it is true. I do not understand this but it does happen in life. I guess people/friendships change. Have a wonderful/blessed day...........

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/7/2023 3:11:00 PM

Hello Paula, a person that says is your friend, then stabs you in the back, is not a friend. True friendship does not do that. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2023 10:22:00 AM

Hello Paula, yes there are many types of friends. Only the true friendships last a life time. Those othe friendships faded away. Have a blessed day. Right pain and friendship do not go together. Hugs. / Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 8:22:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my write. As you know there are many kinds of friends. When this happens, I am done. Pain and friendship do not go together. Hugs. Have a wonderful/blessed day...........