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afterglow
dark ripples still warm
from sunrise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/21/2019 8:19:00 AM
Lovely :)
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Date: 1/27/2019 7:01:00 AM
Very well written!
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Date: 1/25/2019 8:32:00 AM
Very nicely written!
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:04:00 PM
A sensual haiku! Very nice!
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Date: 11/6/2016 3:07:00 AM
an ouchie so beautifully expressed, charms!.. yes, a POTD it is!.. now, how to stop the tears... huggs
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Date: 11/5/2016 5:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this sweet post. It was composed well, though fells with gloom.............A.M.
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Date: 11/4/2016 11:43:00 PM
It always amazes me how much beauty can be found in pain. I can relate to this poem. You're a talented poet.
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Date: 11/4/2016 11:34:00 PM
So, so sad, yet so, so beautiful!!
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:46:00 PM
oh my, this is SO sad, Charma and SO good. POTD. Excellent, dear. you deserve it!
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Date: 11/4/2016 1:39:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Charmaine ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/4/2016 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on being honored with POTD Charmaine! Your poem is so beautifully expressed it is going right into my Faves! 7 ; )
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Date: 11/4/2016 11:15:00 AM
Love this write Char. A Fav!
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Date: 11/4/2016 11:01:00 AM
Hi Charma, Elton John's song gave you some good inspiration. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on this fantabolous poem receiving POTD.
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:03:00 AM
A beautiful write, Charmaine:) congratulations on POTD well deserved:)
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:58:00 AM
Well deserved POTD! I knew it was an exceptional read. Alright to give two 7's? :)
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:09:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on POTD Charmaine:)
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:01:00 AM
Enthralling poetry tinged with sadness, love the line ' tasted 'neath blue-washed linen sheets', forlornly exquisite and intense Charmaine! 7+ fave. Love this.
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Date: 11/4/2016 6:20:00 AM
Lovely write Charmaine, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 11/4/2016 5:52:00 AM
A marvelous poem
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Date: 11/3/2016 9:25:00 PM
Why if I get my hands on him I will kill him!!! ops Kill Me I mean. If you asked me to pick a favorite line in this poem I sure couldn't, they are all favorites! :)
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Date: 11/3/2016 5:22:00 PM
I'm trying to figure out why anyone would ever leave a love like that behind. Very sad Charmaine but I'm going to agree with Carolyn.
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Date: 11/3/2016 2:10:00 PM
I have not heard the Elton John song, but your poem touches my heart. It seems people are always drifting in and out of relationships. However, any man who was lucky enough to fall for you wood be a fool to drift away, Charma. You are one of the most beautiful people I know - body and soul. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 11/3/2016 1:03:00 PM
so beautiful such emotion in every line Charma popping this into my faves it is so gorgeous:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2016 12:11:00 PM
There is something so deeply sad woven throughout the beauty of this poem and it touches me. To imagine the one you loved could somehow forget those moments shared. Well, sometimes I think that way too and it bring tears to my eyes. Your poem is so incredibly mesmerizing, I put myself into this scene, but not so much as the "Him" who has sailed away but the one left longing, hoping to be remembered. You are truly talented my friend, your poem is so filled with emotion.
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