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Haiku

afterglow
dark ripples still warm
from sunrise

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Panagiota Romios

January 8, 2021 at 10:56 AM

Outstanding Haiku. Pangagiota

Paul Marc

October 21, 2019 at 8:19 AM

Lovely :)

Valerie Staton

January 27, 2019 at 7:01 AM

Very well written!

Valerie Staton

January 25, 2019 at 8:32 AM

Very nicely written!

Kim Rodrigues

September 19, 2017 at 8:04 PM

A sensual haiku! Very nice!

Nette Onclaud

November 6, 2016 at 3:07 AM

an ouchie so beautifully expressed, charms!.. yes, a POTD it is!.. now, how to stop the tears... huggs

Afolabi Muideen

November 5, 2016 at 5:57 AM

I enjoyed reading this sweet post. It was composed well, though fells with gloom.............A.M.

Christy Stover

November 4, 2016 at 11:43 PM

It always amazes me how much beauty can be found in pain. I can relate to this poem. You're a talented poet.

Tatianna Leachet

November 4, 2016 at 11:34 PM

So, so sad, yet so, so beautiful!!

Andrea Dietrich

November 4, 2016 at 7:46 PM

oh my, this is SO sad, Charma and SO good. POTD. Excellent, dear. you deserve it!

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 4, 2016 at 1:39 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Charmaine ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

November 4, 2016 at 11:47 AM

Congratulations on being honored with POTD Charmaine! Your poem is so beautifully expressed it is going right into my Faves! 7 ; )

Maurice Yvonne

November 4, 2016 at 11:15 AM

Love this write Char. A Fav!

Alexis Y.

November 4, 2016 at 11:01 AM

Hi Charma, Elton John's song gave you some good inspiration. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Tim Smith

November 4, 2016 at 8:40 AM

Congratulations on this fantabolous poem receiving POTD.

Joanna Daniel

November 4, 2016 at 8:03 AM

A beautiful write, Charmaine:) congratulations on POTD well deserved:)

Paloma P

November 4, 2016 at 7:58 AM

Well deserved POTD! I knew it was an exceptional read. Alright to give two 7's? :)

Daniel Turner

November 4, 2016 at 7:09 AM

Back to say congratulations on POTD Charmaine:)

Paloma P

November 4, 2016 at 7:01 AM

Enthralling poetry tinged with sadness, love the line ' tasted 'neath blue-washed linen sheets', forlornly exquisite and intense Charmaine! 7+ fave. Love this.

Charlie Smith

November 4, 2016 at 6:20 AM

Lovely write Charmaine, congratulations for POTD honors...

White Wolf

November 4, 2016 at 5:52 AM

A marvelous poem

Arthur Vaso

November 3, 2016 at 9:25 PM

Why if I get my hands on him I will kill him!!! ops Kill Me I mean. If you asked me to pick a favorite line in this poem I sure couldn't, they are all favorites! :)

Daniel Turner

November 3, 2016 at 5:22 PM

I'm trying to figure out why anyone would ever leave a love like that behind. Very sad Charmaine but I'm going to agree with Carolyn.

Carolyn Devonshire

November 3, 2016 at 2:10 PM

I have not heard the Elton John song, but your poem touches my heart. It seems people are always drifting in and out of relationships. However, any man who was lucky enough to fall for you wood be a fool to drift away, Charma. You are one of the most beautiful people I know - body and soul. Love you, Carolyn