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Haiku

afterglow
dark ripples still warm
from sunrise

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/8/2021 10:56:00 AM

Outstanding Haiku. Pangagiota

P.M. Richter

Date: 10/21/2019 8:19:00 AM

Lovely :)

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 7:01:00 AM

Very well written!

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:32:00 AM

Very nicely written!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/19/2017 8:04:00 PM

A sensual haiku! Very nice!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2016 3:07:00 AM

an ouchie so beautifully expressed, charms!.. yes, a POTD it is!.. now, how to stop the tears... huggs

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/5/2016 5:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this sweet post. It was composed well, though fells with gloom.............A.M.

Christy Stover

Date: 11/4/2016 11:43:00 PM

It always amazes me how much beauty can be found in pain. I can relate to this poem. You're a talented poet.

Tatianna Leachet

Date: 11/4/2016 11:34:00 PM

So, so sad, yet so, so beautiful!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2016 7:46:00 PM

oh my, this is SO sad, Charma and SO good. POTD. Excellent, dear. you deserve it!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/4/2016 1:39:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Charmaine ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/4/2016 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on being honored with POTD Charmaine! Your poem is so beautifully expressed it is going right into my Faves! 7 ; )

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/4/2016 11:15:00 AM

Love this write Char. A Fav!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/4/2016 11:01:00 AM

Hi Charma, Elton John's song gave you some good inspiration. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Tim Smith

Date: 11/4/2016 8:40:00 AM

Congratulations on this fantabolous poem receiving POTD.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/4/2016 8:03:00 AM

A beautiful write, Charmaine:) congratulations on POTD well deserved:)

Paloma P

Date: 11/4/2016 7:58:00 AM

Well deserved POTD! I knew it was an exceptional read. Alright to give two 7's? :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/4/2016 7:09:00 AM

Back to say congratulations on POTD Charmaine:)

Paloma P

Date: 11/4/2016 7:01:00 AM

Enthralling poetry tinged with sadness, love the line ' tasted 'neath blue-washed linen sheets', forlornly exquisite and intense Charmaine! 7+ fave. Love this.

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/4/2016 6:20:00 AM

Lovely write Charmaine, congratulations for POTD honors...

White Wolf

Date: 11/4/2016 5:52:00 AM

A marvelous poem

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/3/2016 9:25:00 PM

Why if I get my hands on him I will kill him!!! ops Kill Me I mean. If you asked me to pick a favorite line in this poem I sure couldn't, they are all favorites! :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/3/2016 5:22:00 PM

I'm trying to figure out why anyone would ever leave a love like that behind. Very sad Charmaine but I'm going to agree with Carolyn.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/3/2016 2:10:00 PM

I have not heard the Elton John song, but your poem touches my heart. It seems people are always drifting in and out of relationships. However, any man who was lucky enough to fall for you wood be a fool to drift away, Charma. You are one of the most beautiful people I know - body and soul. Love you, Carolyn