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Disgusted Angry Golfer Series - Bad Iron Shot Bashing Club Into Ground Disgusted Angry Golfer Series - Bad Iron Shot Player Ready to Bash Club Into Ground bad golfer stock illustrations

Goodbye Smirking Little White Ball Watch me swing The ball hops The ball veers I am lost My knees lock My clubs shake I am sore To a tee I hate golf 1/23/23 Tricube Poetry Contest Sponsor-Sara Kendrick
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Date: 1/31/2023 6:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem -
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 2/2/2023 9:02:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/30/2023 4:45:00 AM
I got a chuckle out of this one. I have never played golf, so I really don't understand to the fullest. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 2/2/2023 9:02:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/29/2023 9:14:00 PM
Playing, yet? Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/30/2023 2:36:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/23/2023 7:31:00 PM
Funny twist at the end, enjoyed this~
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:55:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 1/23/2023 3:38:00 PM
Ha! A good walk spoiled! I hike now instead :-)
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:55:00 AM
Thank You!

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