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Goodbye Smirking Little White Ball

 Goodbye Smirking Little White Ball

Watch me swing
The ball hops
The ball veers

I am lost
My knees lock
My clubs shake

I am sore
To a tee
I hate golf

1/23/23 

Tricube Poetry Contest

Sponsor-Sara Kendrick

5th

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 6:31 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem - Connie Pachecho February 2, 2023 at 9:02 PM Thank you!

Sara Kendrick January 30, 2023 at 4:45 AM I got a chuckle out of this one. I have never played golf, so I really don't understand to the fullest. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara Connie Pachecho February 2, 2023 at 9:02 PM Thank you!

Christuraj Alex January 29, 2023 at 9:14 PM Playing, yet? Beautiful. Congratulations! Connie Pachecho January 30, 2023 at 2:36 PM Thank you!

Michelle Faulkner January 23, 2023 at 7:31 PM Funny twist at the end, enjoyed this~ Connie Pachecho January 25, 2023 at 10:55 AM Thank You!

Jeff Kyser January 23, 2023 at 3:38 PM Ha! A good walk spoiled! I hike now instead :-) Connie Pachecho January 25, 2023 at 10:55 AM Thank You!