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We see in the country, in Portsall, things that you don’t see in the city, A pastry chef who smiles kindly, A farmer who parks his tractor on the side, We see polite people like Belgians, People listening to the bees work, Trees are seen learning to count, Churches that ring the morning hours, We see beautiful things in the country, Things that you don’t see in the city, People saying hello to you at the bakery, People watching the snails think, You see people looking at you like birds, Writers wearing pink hats, Who drank tequila with their chicken breast, Houses where people will be nice, We see in the country, on the side of Portsall Things that you don’t see in the city, The city often I fear, makes people evil, We see large houses painted pink or yellow Which make you think of Sicily or Tuscany.

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Date: 11/18/2024 4:40:00 PM
I hope you can enjoy your country more often than not, Yann. I must say it sounds lovely! Mmm, baguettes come to mind:):)
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Date: 11/18/2024 12:43:00 PM
Ahhh!!! That sounded like a very nice country visit. I think I would like to watch the snails and see those yellow houses. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 11/15/2024 8:31:00 AM
Watching the snails think. What a creative original line. Your poetry is always unique
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/16/2024 5:42:00 PM
thank you so much Andrea for the kind words, enjoy your week end
Date: 11/15/2024 2:31:00 AM
- I live in the element of nature where we listen to the silence and nature, Yann :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/16/2024 5:43:00 PM
i really envy you Anne lise, i love silence and nature, it helps me think best wishes
Date: 11/14/2024 2:52:00 PM
I enjoyed this charming portrait of country life, Yann. The slower pace of living that the country offers is certainly very nice. Great writing! :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/15/2024 12:27:00 AM
thanks evelyn, i am adept of the slower pace, very well said; thanks poet
Date: 11/14/2024 1:47:00 PM
Quite a picture you display..' amplify outline and Portray.' I see the tuskan in my mind; bees are Humming that world views fine.'
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/15/2024 12:28:00 AM
thanks Joe for stopping by, and commenting with light and kindness
Date: 11/14/2024 7:30:00 AM
My sis and I were talking about something similar today. She visited Indianapolis where the place was clean and people were nice. Certainly varies within the U.S. though nice people are always around, some areas exude a lovely mood!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/15/2024 12:33:00 AM
thanks kim, i don't know Indianapolis, except the name, this is quite interesting mentioning, there are very nice people in US of course, more than i Europe, i guess, where people are selfish and "stubborn" best wishes
Date: 11/14/2024 7:12:00 AM
I'd love to visit. Maybe one day. You paint an enticing picture of the countryside
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/15/2024 12:29:00 AM
thanks Tom, well said, i couldn't live without country, even i live in city thank you so much for stopping by
Date: 11/14/2024 5:24:00 AM
Dear Yann, I loved reading your charming verses. What a whimsical portrait of rural French life. Yes, we should cherish life's small wonders, which are often overlooked in urban hustle. Well Inked! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/13/2024 2:48:00 PM
this is lovely, yann, and i really like the examples you've chosen ("people watching the snails think"), but i live in a big city and we do have our own "beautiful things," believe it or not...
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2024 6:45:00 PM
totally agree ilene, every city has his own charm, i just need a va et vient between city and country, thanks for the supportive comment
Date: 11/13/2024 3:30:00 AM
You break my heart because I can't travel now. I've been to Catania, Messina, and Florence. Great food, great sights. I can cry.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2024 6:46:00 PM
ooppps sorry Victor, hope you keep nice memories, like me, i d'ont travel much either now have a nice day
Date: 11/13/2024 3:23:00 AM
Seems life there is beautiful with people who are friendly and hospitable. Country life is sweeter and many prefer life in the country side to city life. Beautifully penned poem, dear Yaan.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2024 6:48:00 PM
thanks a lot Valsa, every one choose his life i guess, i regret sometimes not living in country, may be buy a house there, when older, thanks for the kind and supportive words

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