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Written 2/7/2024

Builder-blocks build with Builder-blocks are entertaining Entertaining for little ones Entertaining even for adults Adults get creative Adults articulate to their children Children build towers Children build houses Houses can be different sizes Houses can be one color or colorful Colorful pieces interlock Colorful endless play Play creative handcrafted Play and still learn Learn to be interacting Learn social skills Skills grow and develop Skills artistic challenges Challenges to understand them Challenges in children’s life Life to figure problems Life own experience Experience earning success Experience own respect Respect by modeling Respect amidst friends Friends from school Friends that are special forever Forever be yourself Forever be spiritually joyful Joyful fulfillment of oneself Joyful excitement of love Love toward someone Love is the deep heart feeling Feeling compassion or passion Feeling angry or sad Sad and conflicted with thoughts Sad in streams of tears Tears echo silence and despair Tears of happiness Happiness than never ends Happiness to the heart Heart guiding smile Heart inside sings Sings to dream Sings for comfort and peace Peace of mind Peace of freedom Freedom… Mind…

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Date: 2/18/2024 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 2/17/2024 2:46:00 PM
Loved your takenon my contest...Very creative and flows really well..Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/17/2024 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Simple thoughts can be the best thoughts to be penned. A good message as well!
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Date: 2/7/2024 1:17:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful write. Good Luck if for a contest... Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 2/7/2024 12:04:00 PM
Dear Eve, What a most creative blitz this is! I absolutely loved it and the flow is seamlessly, youv nailed it really and delivered also a very unique theme. I love the lines “ learn social skills” “ tears of happiness” and depth of this too is soulful. Pleasure reading your work. Best wishes if its for the contest. Sending you light always
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Date: 2/7/2024 7:33:00 AM
- Very skillfully done, Eve ... I've started several times on this form ... when I'm halfway through I lose the thread :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/7/2024 2:32:00 AM
Not my favorite form but you did it very well. If for the contest good luck. Hugs.
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