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Dear Dale, So Loved

Dear Dale, so loved were you that even now, thirty-nine years later, you live inside the dreams of your siblings. I suppose this to be true since I, at least, have had you in my dreams. Dear Dale, you came to live with me and my sisters when I was halfway through my childhood. You with your freckles and reddish hair and your spirit of enthusiasm, inspiring others with your love of the Lord. Dear Dale, although a stepbrother to me, you were my one true brother in this life who stayed up late at the kitchen table sharing fun stories with me and the others who liked to spend the night simply conversing. Dear Dale, you’d be surprised at things today. So few people just sit and enjoy each other’s company. You though were a firecracker and a social butterfly! Loving to participate, you encouraged everyone to partake of the good clean fun you were a part of. Dear Dale, you went abroad to bring the Gospel to anyone you found who would hear God’s word. Then home you came and studied many years at college, nearly graduating from your law school until death came to you from out of nowhere. Dear Dale, we lost you when a drunken fool ran over you as you sat so innocently late one night on the curb of a solitary street. Your death was instantaneous. Then and there, I’m sure your soul flew straightaway to heaven. Dear Dale, although of course you had your flaws, to me you were a perfect example of the way a man should have integrity. Abruptly you were lost to death, but we will reunite. “Only the good die young” echoes in my mind when I think of you. Jan. 22, 2023 for The Loved and Lost Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh

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Date: 1/28/2023 6:30:00 AM
I'm teared reading this Andrea. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 1/24/2023 10:33:00 AM
Wow Andrea what a big loss, I feel this myself He worked for the Lord, my brother too then. Oh my..' All blessings and comfort Andrea I Reckon he's feeling for us in this present age ' God bless '
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Date: 1/23/2023 8:09:00 PM
Andrea, this is beautiful. Your brother sounds like he was an adorable angel on this earth, and you have so honored his memory. Thank you for sharing him with us. Beautiful and precious. I'm so sorry for your deep loss, you'll see him again someday, that is ever our hope in these deep losses.
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Date: 1/23/2023 3:22:00 PM
Wish I could put the words together so eloquently. Yes, those words echo in my mind. "Only the good die young." But there are those that are still living, like you my precious, talented, beautiful and wonderful sister that are also good and I'm so thankful that you didn't die young, but blessed me and those around you, still.
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Date: 1/23/2023 10:34:00 AM
Dale must have been quite the person to know. Alcohol is so destructive, and your little tribute is an example of this.
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Date: 1/23/2023 2:09:00 AM
What an amazing tribute to your very loved brother Dale. It doesn't matter how many years pass….we loved them and will always miss them! Beautiful Andrea….Debx
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Date: 1/22/2023 9:51:00 PM
A stepbrother to be admired. Indeed the young often die young. Such a pity. Too many car accidents. May he rest in peace.
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Date: 1/22/2023 5:00:00 PM
Andrea , This tribute poem to your stepbrother is so very emotional, encompassing his amazing love and gifts that he shared with yourself and others . Moving and beautiful my friend. Someone I would have liked to meet . Susan :)
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