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Days of Emptiness

She sits by herself on the grains of white sand basking in the warmth of sunshine staring out at the sea while waves of sapphire blue crept towards her. Tears stream down her face, another day of emptiness, another day filled with pain. This was where they made love when they first met under the cover of midnight and the waves' lullaby. She closed her eyes thought erupt in her soul holding him once more leaving a calm. He was gone. Or was he? 11/6/2018

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Date: 12/6/2018 8:30:00 AM
Hello Eve, I feel her sadness of losing her lover ,the person she feels love for. Yes she is sad. i feel her sadness. have nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/27/2018 5:08:00 PM
Hello Dear Eve, This one is an amazing passionate, emotional, and very sad verse. Your words, thoughts, and images with this theme certainly captivated my thoughts and emotions with emotional plight of the woman on the beach. Superbly Done!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/15/2018 8:30:00 PM
This is very nice, Eve. I am glad I came back to see this other poem of yours i had missed. Also I came here to thank you for my placement in the umbrella contest. i loved that picture you showed us.
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Date: 11/13/2018 11:22:00 PM
Eve, your poem is so beautifully sad, so well penned and touching, well done ~
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Date: 11/13/2018 11:36:00 PM
Thank you , but it didn't win :(
Date: 11/10/2018 8:16:00 AM
You sad write turned mystery held me tight.. you words, as they have many times before, held me captive!
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Date: 11/9/2018 8:27:00 AM
Hi Eve, this is such a wonderful write from your golden pen. Such beauty is held within the sadness. You play the heartstrings so well, painting such a tender canvas within the mind. Excellent write Eve. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/8/2018 9:25:00 AM
Wow, I am particular about the poetry that I like, and yours I like, there is something in the feel of it that moves me, thank you Eve, Meru
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Date: 11/7/2018 9:11:00 AM
I agree Eve, the ending left me feeling all the possibilities of life. An excellent write xxoo
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Date: 11/6/2018 9:06:00 AM
This is well written for the contest Eve. I like the expression and then the question at the end :)
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:59:00 AM
Eve, I loved the ending. It says so much! Nicely done.
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:42:00 AM
Eve, this was gorgeous and heart touching and I like how the ending leaves it open for perhaps a little happiness to appear. I love the word choices in this and how it rhythmically flows like the sea she is gazing upon. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 11/6/2018 3:57:00 AM
Well written Eve, I think many saw that in the picture. Good luck. Tom.
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