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Paddling by William Kay Blacklock

Waves and spume tickles toes as I paddle on the shore ... reliving my childhood days Sweet memories come flooding back to me a tiny tot having fun in the sea Tetractys This Poetry Contest Charles Messina 4/28/19

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/7/2019 4:05:00 PM

Back with Big congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2019 2:21:00 PM

yours was so cute. Congrats on a great win ,Jan.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/4/2019 9:46:00 AM

Back with congrats Jan, I'm sure it took.many back to those care free days. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 8:30:00 AM

- Congratulations on your top win, Jan :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2019 8:28:00 AM

Hi Jan, You penned a good poem and it complemented the photo very well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Charles Messina

Date: 5/4/2019 7:05:00 AM

Wonderful memories...Awesome write, Jan. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs // Charlie xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/29/2019 6:42:00 PM

Nice blend of poem and picture, Jan. Adorable, really! :) gw

Eve Roper

Date: 4/28/2019 7:24:00 PM

a touch of motherhood comes to life in this write, Jan, just perfect.. good luck in the contest. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/28/2019 6:40:00 PM

So pretty! Love it!

W.A. Cholt

Date: 4/28/2019 6:12:00 PM

The poem matches the picture perfectly. Nicely written.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/28/2019 5:40:00 PM

Hi Jan: A wonder-ful poem. I remember sledding with my little daughters on another season and your sweet poem brings back memories.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2019 4:45:00 PM

wonderful memories and they gave you a wonderful poem.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/28/2019 4:14:00 PM

I shall always recall the scene with my daughter and granddaughter experiencing the ocean for the first time as toddlers - and cherish the photos! Mahalo for the reminder and good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico

Carole Duet

Date: 4/28/2019 3:02:00 PM

Love this, Jan. It brings back a lot of memories for me too. Good luck in the contest.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/28/2019 2:52:00 PM

a lovely poem to match the picture, jan! best of luck in the contest...

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/28/2019 1:02:00 PM

Oh, this is a good one! Well done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2019 12:19:00 PM

- Sweet summer memories ... love it, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/28/2019 11:32:00 AM

Lovely poem Jan...best wishes..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/28/2019 10:12:00 AM

Lovely to reflect Jan, the happiest days of our lives for sure. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/28/2019 10:18:00 AM

I was inspired by the contest Tom, I write for so few these days and spend so little time on soup especially at the moment as son is home for the first time since New Year and time with him is so precious:-) hugs jan xx