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Paddling by William Kay Blacklock

Childhood Memories- Tet

Waves
and spume
tickles toes
as I paddle
on the shore ... reliving my childhood days

Sweet memories come flooding back to me
a tiny tot
having fun
in the 
sea

Tetractys This Poetry Contest
Charles Messina


4/28/19

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Eve Roper Date: 5/7/2019 4:05:00 PM Back with Big congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/4/2019 2:21:00 PM yours was so cute. Congrats on a great win ,Jan. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/4/2019 9:46:00 AM Back with congrats Jan, I'm sure it took.many back to those care free days. Tom Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/4/2019 8:30:00 AM - Congratulations on your top win, Jan :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 5/4/2019 8:28:00 AM Hi Jan, You penned a good poem and it complemented the photo very well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 5/4/2019 7:05:00 AM Wonderful memories...Awesome write, Jan. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs // Charlie xx Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/29/2019 6:42:00 PM Nice blend of poem and picture, Jan. Adorable, really! :) gw Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/28/2019 7:24:00 PM a touch of motherhood comes to life in this write, Jan, just perfect.. good luck in the contest. Hugs Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/28/2019 6:40:00 PM So pretty! Love it! Login to Reply

W.A. Cholt Date: 4/28/2019 6:12:00 PM The poem matches the picture perfectly. Nicely written. Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 4/28/2019 5:40:00 PM Hi Jan: A wonder-ful poem. I remember sledding with my little daughters on another season and your sweet poem brings back memories. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/28/2019 4:45:00 PM wonderful memories and they gave you a wonderful poem. Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 4/28/2019 4:14:00 PM I shall always recall the scene with my daughter and granddaughter experiencing the ocean for the first time as toddlers - and cherish the photos! Mahalo for the reminder and good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply

Carole Duet Date: 4/28/2019 3:02:00 PM Love this, Jan. It brings back a lot of memories for me too. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 4/28/2019 2:52:00 PM a lovely poem to match the picture, jan! best of luck in the contest... Login to Reply

P.S. Awtry Date: 4/28/2019 1:02:00 PM Oh, this is a good one! Well done :) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/28/2019 12:19:00 PM - Sweet summer memories ... love it, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 4/28/2019 11:32:00 AM Lovely poem Jan...best wishes.. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/28/2019 10:12:00 AM Lovely to reflect Jan, the happiest days of our lives for sure. Tom. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/28/2019 10:18:00 AM I was inspired by the contest Tom, I write for so few these days and spend so little time on soup especially at the moment as son is home for the first time since New Year and time with him is so precious:-) hugs jan xx