Cadence of a Seashore

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frolicking with waves on a tranquil seashore… saffron-hued sapphire waves rolling away, a mesmerized child, carried the memory… reminiscence of a blissful awe-inspiring cadence. a buddhist temple on the sublime shore, melodic symphonic chimes soaring from above, serenaded me to my forest of dreams, where gentle humming of a chartreuse waterfall ignited creative inspiration. to this day, I often stop, close my eyes, drown myself in a reverie inspiring my imagination lavender ... I, a traveller from the ancient world of history walking through ages, crossing rivers and seas, hills and dales of the universe, in search for love, kindness and inner peace. August 22, 2021 "Seas Or Oceans" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France FIRST PLACE Brian Strand "Vers Libre" Poetry Contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/9/2022 9:49:00 AM

Mala, I can feel the "cadence" of the peaceful waves and see the "saffron hued sapphire waves." I love the way you use color and vibrant, visceral words to drop us into your beautiful scene of chimes and waterfalls and the endless "cadence" of the seashore. Cadence - great word! Wonderfully done. Congrats and highs! Blessings of "love, kindness and inner peace" for you dear friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2021 5:46:00 PM

Dearest Mala, the creative spirit of your gifted pen shines in your use of color and vivid imagery. Your are such a wonderful poetess! The serene scene you portray captivates yet releases my imagination to join you "in search for love, kindness and inner peace." Beautiful! Splendid poetry that sweeps me up and away! Congratulations on your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/13/2021 3:28:00 PM

Dear Susan, Thank you very much for reading my poem - I feel honoured to share with you.

Constance La France

Date: 8/27/2021 6:19:00 AM

Mala, beautiful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas, I adore the image ~love and serenity _Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/13/2021 3:27:00 PM

Thanks, Constance. I feel honoured.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/26/2021 11:53:00 AM

lovey poem and creates a fabulous atmosphere in the mind! I had a similar experience living on a hill station and temple bells from a nearby temple on a different mountain would chime across every morning. Congrats on your win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/26/2021 12:19:00 PM

Thanks, Krish. Living on a hill station hearing temple-bells, must be surreal!