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The sky an ocean of gathering crimson, leaden on hues French-vanilla ice-cream, puffy cotton candy clouds wandering sociable. Grassy field of red spice cinnamon poppies. Dream of pleasure indulges in sweetness of childhood, her large blue eyes watch, a half-smile hangs on, a wink of sun glare, untighten her fingers, cries, red balloons into the crimson they bolt. 3/13/2022

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Date: 3/20/2022 2:36:00 PM
Oh, that feeling when the strings tug loose from the hand. Nicely done.
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Date: 3/18/2022 2:56:00 PM
An automatic Fav for this poer, Truly beautiful, Eve, And you wrote it on my birtdaydat to boot. Very cool Pangie
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/18/2022 3:01:00 PM
Happy belated birthday my friend. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment and Fav. Blessings
Date: 3/15/2022 11:56:00 AM
I cannot help but think you found the art first and wrote the poem in honor of it. Well done no matter which order!
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Date: 3/14/2022 7:23:00 PM
"Dream of pleasure indulges in sweetness of childhood" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/13/2022 7:30:00 PM
this is a "sweet" poem indeed Eve...lovely :)
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