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Atmospheric Pressure

I’ve heard about atmospheric pressure, but honestly, it’s not a thing I get - only that it’s something people measure, and when it’s low, I hear we might get wet! I guess they never taught me it in school. In fact, I googled it just now. It said we’re living in the bottom of a pool, just one with air – not water – overhead! I really like that nifty metaphor, but how warm air that rises makes it low I can’t quite comprehend, and I get more confused when reading how it makes wind blow! My brain’s now fried. I just can’t get the gist of it! And that’s why I’m no scientist! Sept. 2, 2017 for Shadow Hamilton's Atmospheric Pressure Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/5/2017 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea, great Sonnet, love the humour, very clever, :))
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Date: 9/4/2017 11:34:00 PM
Contnd. Congratulations, Andrea on your placement.
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Date: 9/4/2017 10:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win. I really enjoyed your approach to this. Blessings.
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Date: 9/4/2017 8:51:00 PM
Good one.Congrats Andrea.Love.
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Date: 9/4/2017 7:24:00 PM
Nice job, Andrea! Congratulations on your contest placement!
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Date: 9/4/2017 3:34:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Andrea on your win!
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Date: 9/3/2017 6:28:00 PM
Hi Andrea, good luck in the contest. I loved the fun content of this one. This isn't actually a subject that is easy to write about but i have to say, your approach is a winner to me. Atmospheric pressure affects our weather in so many different ways. Anyway, an excellent Sonnet. Good luck in the contest. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 9/3/2017 7:23:00 AM
Very well written, Andrea.
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Date: 9/3/2017 4:53:00 AM
Andrea, it may me a good reason for not being a scientist.You need not fry your brain.Does fried brain of a poet really taste good? I doubt.Joking apart, your sonnet is full of fun. Love.
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Date: 9/2/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Andrea. Blessings for your kindness. I really like Atmospheric Pressure. I was afraid to try it. You are more bold than me.
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Date: 9/2/2017 8:00:00 PM
you are so clever, andrea! this is just adorable...
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Date: 9/2/2017 6:29:00 PM
A funny sonnet??? I love it!
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Date: 9/2/2017 3:43:00 PM
yes and I'm hoping Hurricane Irma is pushed away from my state by atmospheric pressure
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Date: 9/2/2017 3:24:00 PM
Hi Andrea, this is Emma. Russell had his couple of hours today and he wants me to read and write some for him. I said just a few before I head home. My sweetheart said, "This is a fabulous write Andrea. I am impressed you can write on such a boring subject. I wonder why Shadow made a contest like this. I haven't written for a contest for awhile, I just haven't gotten back into that yet. I really loved having your clever poem read to me this afternoon. You have made me smile, great work." Emma :)
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Date: 9/2/2017 3:14:00 PM
WOW! Andrea, you made me smile and you made me laugh. You presented this dry topic with such humor! You deserve kudos just for that. But this is well written and deserves to win!!
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