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Circles of Thought

Within the vortex of your mind There dwells a psychedelic thought No need to trip on LSD You're getting high from neurons sought Concentric circles out of control A neural tornado swirling round Moving at the speed of light Losing gravity in its flight There's a beam of light at the end Connected by infinity's thread Your psychedelic thought begins to spin You're thinking now in infrared! ~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/19/2017 12:21:00 PM
Very creative this is Joseph, I feel like I just took a fast ride! lol :) Love it
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Date: 5/4/2017 1:20:00 AM
A poem that plays on the mind. Great stuff and good luck in the contest Joseph. Maria
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Date: 4/29/2017 6:57:00 PM
Well done, Joseph, ~*
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Date: 4/29/2017 4:57:00 PM
I am not into this artist. I don't know much about art, except that I enjoy it. Sounds like great modern art work that you described very well.
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Date: 4/28/2017 11:30:00 PM
I'm supposing Einstein's Special Relativity has something to do with this. :p
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Date: 4/28/2017 6:31:00 PM
This poem is light and refreshing leaving the reader mildly confused, full abstracts carrying sly messages, with experience dusting the words with style. You did a good job.
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Date: 4/28/2017 3:18:00 PM
Terrific take on the contest Joseph, good luck...
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Date: 4/28/2017 2:37:00 PM
how vivid and energetic can this get... i just hope you included a picture, joseph... huggs
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Date: 4/28/2017 7:58:00 AM
Now this was different, a very cool different. I really liked this one Joseph. A mind rhyme. Definitely cool.
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