Circles of Thought

Within the vortex of your mind
 There dwells a psychedelic thought
 No need to trip on LSD
 You're getting high from neurons sought

 Concentric circles out of control
 A neural tornado swirling round
 Moving at the speed of light
 Losing gravity in its flight

 There's a beam of light at the end
 Connected by infinity's thread
 Your psychedelic thought begins to spin
 You're thinking now in infrared!
                          ~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Very creative this is Joseph, I feel like I just took a fast ride! lol :) Love it
Williams Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 1:20 AM
A poem that plays on the mind. Great stuff and good luck in the contest Joseph. Maria
Roper Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Well done, Joseph, ~*
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 4:57 PM
I am not into this artist. I don't know much about art, except that I enjoy it. Sounds like great modern art work that you described very well.
Flower Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 11:30 PM
I'm supposing Einstein's Special Relativity has something to do with this. :p
Pinet Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 6:31 PM
This poem is light and refreshing leaving the reader mildly confused, full abstracts carrying sly messages, with experience dusting the words with style. You did a good job.
Smith Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 3:18 PM
Terrific take on the contest Joseph, good luck...
Onclaud Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 2:37 PM
how vivid and energetic can this get... i just hope you included a picture, joseph... huggs
Green Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Now this was different, a very cool different. I really liked this one Joseph. A mind rhyme. Definitely cool.
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