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A Winter Inspired Prayer

Look at winter’s snowy face The ground wrapped in white gossamer lace Wondrous it is to be in this dreamy land That looks like cotton candy land Lord! Make my soul sparkling white That to Thee, I shall fly like sprite Honorable mention 22. Jan. 2022 Bite size Poems No.33. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Date: 11/12/2022 1:26:00 PM
Lovely, Valsa ~
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Date: 1/29/2022 6:12:00 AM
Charming write Valsa and congratulations on your placement in the contest. I really enjoyed reading this especially that today we are in the middle of a blustery snow storm. Blessings,Paulette
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Date: 1/25/2022 1:01:00 PM
Pretty!
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Date: 1/23/2022 10:37:00 AM
Snowiest imagination. Or splendid experience. Either is well served PTL
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Date: 1/22/2022 5:47:00 PM
'Cotton candy land' -- Your imagination is alive and well, Valsa. Send some of that cotton candy to Chicago, ok?! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 1/22/2022 2:23:00 PM
Fine pen Vansa, nice imagery and good expression too. Have a blessed day,Gordon
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Date: 1/22/2022 10:38:00 AM
"Cotton Candy Land" is a winner by itself!
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Date: 1/22/2022 9:20:00 AM
Breathtaking! The flow and rhyme quite divine! Good luck in the contest~I think this is a winner! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 1/22/2022 7:46:00 AM
Stunning! Very nice :)
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Date: 1/22/2022 7:28:00 AM
In your meditation, my friend Valsa, you conjure a great deal of enthusiasm and motivation. Blessings
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Date: 1/22/2022 6:44:00 AM
I suppose in the north you would have some snow, My knowledge of India is vey low. Victor
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Date: 1/22/2022 6:01:00 AM
Much devotion and inspiration you invoke in this prayer my friend. Peace!
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Date: 1/22/2022 3:58:00 AM
A lovely prayer Valsa, hope alls well. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 1/22/2022 5:13:00 AM
Thanks a lot Tom for your kind visit and comment !
Date: 1/22/2022 1:53:00 AM
Lovely. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/22/2022 1:57:00 AM
Thanks a lot Gina....! Love and Peace...

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