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A Ramshackle Faith

If the moonless night slept, sheepish it'd be. Strange, fresh dude not cool chit chat about him awkward and painful. Where is a loo or rear window to crawl out of, I'm so tempted. Bragged he loathed his girlfriend. He purred, one more date. I said, no. 12/29/2019 3. A Ramshackle Faith

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Date: 1/12/2020 1:50:00 PM
I really like that you had her say NO at the end. That was clever way to end this kind of date!! Congrats on the winner list, Eve.
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Date: 1/11/2020 3:02:00 PM
great poem sweet Eve, congrats! x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/11/2020 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eve:-) You made me laugh with this one!
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:26:00 PM
I know this guy. So glad you said "no!"
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Date: 12/30/2019 2:56:00 PM
You painted a portrait of that fresh dude brilliantly Eve. No second date for the boaster. All the best.
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Date: 12/30/2019 6:28:00 AM
Wise girl! Who wants a date with someone who is in love with himself? Great writing! Good luck, Eve!
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Date: 12/30/2019 2:41:00 AM
There everywhere, people who talk non stop about themselves lol. Yawn. Good luck. Happy New year Eve. Tom
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