Eve Roper Poet Diminished Hexaverse

A Ramshackle Faith

If the moonless night
slept, sheepish it'd be.
Strange, fresh dude not cool 
chit chat about him
awkward and painful. 

Where is a loo
or rear window 
to crawl out of, 
I'm so tempted.

Bragged he loathed
his girlfriend.
He purred, one

more date.
I said, 

no.

12/29/2019




3. A Ramshackle Faith

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Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2020 at 1:50 PM I really like that you had her say NO at the end. That was clever way to end this kind of date!! Congrats on the winner list, Eve.

Beautiful Scars January 11, 2020 at 3:02 PM great poem sweet Eve, congrats! x:-)-luloo

Edward Ibeh January 11, 2020 at 7:45 AM Congratulations on your win, Eve:-) You made me laugh with this one!

Caren Krutsinger January 1, 2020 at 5:26 PM I know this guy. So glad you said "no!"

Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 2:56 PM You painted a portrait of that fresh dude brilliantly Eve. No second date for the boaster. All the best.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 30, 2019 at 6:28 AM Wise girl! Who wants a date with someone who is in love with himself? Great writing! Good luck, Eve!

Tom Cunningham December 30, 2019 at 2:41 AM There everywhere, people who talk non stop about themselves lol. Yawn. Good luck. Happy New year Eve. Tom