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A PLACE IN THE SUN A place in the sun, it's there I want to run. . . Orange and yellow palette brush my face, they dry my wells of fears and so I won, I-- slowly flower from God's skirt of grace. Unfailing is His love shown sweet to His face, I eagerly crave to behold in million tons as to entwine in His warmth: My Master race. A place in the sun, it's there I want to run. . . Rainbow peeping after some raging storm spun; His reminder that we: His people must chase infant days to grow better with our love ones. Orange and yellow palette brush my face for God so kind. My pains, He soothes and erase. Tender are His words as I read them one by one helping me be fearless yet humble with my pace. They dry my wells of fears and so I won-- then my heart soar high, I have some fun. Evil always haunts but with Him, all I can evade, hence, troubles are little but close to none. I slowly flower from God's skirt of grace. . . God crashes darkness with love not by gun. Must we go elsewhere when He is the best hiding place? God is everything before even life began God our undefeatable fortress-- His base a place in the sun. __________________________________________________ Sponsor Gail Angel Doyle Contest Name A Place In The Sun Placed 1st ©O>E. Guillermo 10:20 pm. January 12, 2015

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Date: 4/7/2016 8:29:00 AM
superb writing Olive, loved this from first to last, truly blessed! great stuff!, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 4/4/2016 6:27:00 AM
Greetings Olive. Congrats for having your awesome work featured in the Poetry Soup home page!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:23:00 AM
Olive, This is a sweet win. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:38:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. :)!
Date: 2/8/2015 6:54:00 AM
Amazing write, Olive.. You so impress me! Congrats on first place!
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:37:00 AM
thanks much Dave you do always impress me too. :)
Date: 2/4/2015 11:57:00 PM
beautiful win!!
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:25:00 AM
thanks much.. :)!
Date: 2/4/2015 12:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your beautifully inspiring poem tonight, Olive, and I love the flow of the form...very well done! Congrats on your first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:24:00 AM
thanks much Rhoonda.. i am happy to read that a reader enjpys what I write. :D!
Date: 2/3/2015 4:27:00 PM
Olive, a huge congratulations to you for your 1st Place win for your very inspiring poem with such a powerful message. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:22:00 AM
thanks much Sandra.. :) I appreciate your visits.. :D!
Date: 2/3/2015 4:48:00 AM
Extremely inspiring Olive,, wonderfully put thoughts,, Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:21:00 AM
your comments Dr. Upma inspires me to write more.. :D!
Date: 2/2/2015 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Olive, a very inspiring write. Blessings to you dear friend Eve
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:19:00 AM
thanks much Eve.. :) Blessings to you also.. :D!
Date: 2/2/2015 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations Olive on your 1st place win... Verlena
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:36:00 AM
thanks much Verlena.. :)
Date: 2/2/2015 1:32:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserving win... lov, nad!
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:35:00 AM
thanks much.. :)@
Date: 2/2/2015 12:33:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your top spot win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:16:00 AM
thanks much JAn.. :)!
Date: 1/28/2015 7:57:00 AM
This is an awesome and wonderful poem. Its nice spending some time here.. It feels so quality and deserving. Great pen friend
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:14:00 AM
thanks much for reading my poem and finding it pleasant to read. :)!
Date: 1/15/2015 10:31:00 PM
the form you used looks so challenging. MY. You did a good job with it, Olive. I bet Gail will really like this one for her contest.
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Date: 1/16/2015 1:51:00 AM
Thank you Andie.. :) a pleasure to read a comment from you.. :)! indeed it is a challenging form but I like it. :) it's one of the unforgettable forms I ever tried hence I wanna do it again.. :)! I hope she likes it.. :)!
Date: 1/12/2015 8:33:00 PM
Great linage and Strong message. A place in the sun
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Date: 1/13/2015 8:13:00 AM
thanks much John.. :)! I want it to be like that.. :)!
Date: 1/12/2015 3:15:00 PM
A place in the sun is the place to be, so let your heart soar, soar so free. Beautiful, spiritual poetry Olive. To my favourites it goes, James :) :)
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Date: 1/13/2015 8:12:00 AM
thanks much James.. :) Indeed, there is a two meaning I wanna convey in this.. to stay always on light and to seek always for God's light.. :)! Thanks much James.. :) and adding this to your fave wow.! :)!
Date: 1/12/2015 1:01:00 PM
Super-awesome write Olive... Verlena
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Date: 1/13/2015 8:10:00 AM
Thanks much Verlena.. :)! Truly Appreciate your drop by. :)!
Date: 1/12/2015 11:18:00 AM
.... his base a place in the sun - wow such an awesome line. Such a wonderful colourful spiritual write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/13/2015 4:05:00 AM
thankd much Jan.. ;)hugs
Date: 1/12/2015 8:34:00 AM
Lovely my dear Olive -- I love the word "chase" -- a chasing of the rainbow, of the light, of the incredible promises of his love. 7
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Date: 1/12/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thanks much David!.. :) God bless us all. :D
Date: 1/12/2015 8:28:00 AM
You have a quick wit, gentle heart, strong faith and a colorful imagination ...a deadly combination to success. Emile.
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Date: 1/12/2015 8:59:00 PM
weeeeee deadly.. :O :D Thanks much Emile.. :)! I so welcome your comments.. :) They inspire me to write more.. :)!