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A First Date

With quivering hearth and shaking legs youthful courage fought with fear I stood there quaking loving learning hoping yearning wanting more how many chances out of ten were I to ask you out without a hint of hesitation she said I'd give you eight I thought well that is high enough and settled down to make the date we settled on a Friday night I'd pick her up at sea side pub she waited out I waited in we missed that first night out First Date Competition Brenda Chiri 8.2.2018

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