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A Childs Letters

when all is a tangle of alphabet voiceless, unwound and looming what bits of sky shall we replace falling into place like forgotten speech puzzles of the mind the deepest fragments of blue cannot be numbered or spoken they have no number or symbol but themselves alone as I am alone approaching as a stranger approaches the song too lovely for the dance and though I as air should speak passing between your lips to digest the sun your eyes have given with the mathematics of stars I am measureless within you as time before the heartbeat of clocks I am a word alone without paper misspelled a child's letters on scattered blocks laid bare and inert formless as a scribble

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/9/2016 11:55:00 PM
awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 1/18/2014 12:15:00 PM
Orphani, amazing the imagery, it touches the very soul of the innocent. Many blessings to have seen such a creative poet online... SKAT
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:58:00 PM
Congrats on going through the first round and being in the winners' page..Sara
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International contest Orphani. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:41:00 AM
Magnificant Free Verse. Best wishes on this masterpiece going on to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 6/26/2011 2:50:00 PM
My ciongratulations on your poem being featured this week, orphani
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Date: 6/26/2011 2:49:00 PM
My ciongratulations on your poem being featured this week, orphani
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Date: 6/25/2011 7:43:00 PM
orphani, the wonderment of a child's view...wouldn't that be "misspeled"? very nice imagery. ;-)
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Orphani. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:20:00 PM
orphani, i agree w riley & Dr. Ram, a beautiful piece of work, definitely NOT childs play. ;-)
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Been missing your work..Sara
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:41:00 PM
beautiful expressions you have penned so well, orphani
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