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The Ultimate Gift

All I want is a Christmas lover A present that is like no other His wife gave permission Under one condition Just give Santa time to recover November 19, 2019 Contest ~ Holiday Themed Limerick Sponsor ~ Tania Kitchin Count ~ 9, 9, 6, 6, 9

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/9/2020 12:28:00 AM

LOL... Cute...

Muddasar Javad

Date: 1/1/2020 12:50:00 AM

i like it :) well Congrats, plz keep writing & sharing..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/14/2019 4:35:00 PM

This is very clever and cute Cecilia. Congratulations on your first place win! Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/5/2019 9:31:00 PM

Very cute and certainly worthy of the top prize in the limerick contest, Cecilia. see that Mrs. Claus knows best. LOL. Congrats, Gershon

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:47:00 AM

Yes she does, lol. Thank you. Hugs

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/5/2019 4:36:00 PM

Delighted to see your name in the No. 1 winner's category, Cecilia! Well-deserved for your witty lim! Many thanks for your kind comment re my win and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - BoB

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:48:00 AM

Thank you Robert. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2019 5:31:00 PM

back with my congrats, Cecilia.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Hugs

Joseph May

Date: 12/4/2019 4:48:00 PM

Lol..Congrats on your win Cecilia

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. Hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/4/2019 8:54:00 AM

Congrats Cecilia on your win!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Chris. Hugs

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/4/2019 8:45:00 AM

CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thank you Janice. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/3/2019 8:04:00 PM

Cecilia, congratulations on your first place win with your cute and funny limerick, loved the last line!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Tania for a number one placement in your fun contest. Hugs

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/25/2019 11:35:00 AM

Not gonna try to touch this gift message, Cecilia. Lol! Very risque limerick tho'. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:55:00 AM

Tee hee,,,,all in good fun. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2019 6:53:00 PM

hilarious one, Cecilia. I like them naughty like this.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/6/2019 8:56:00 AM

Glad you liked Andrea. Hugs

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/21/2019 3:57:00 PM

ho ho ho...too funny. It's nice to be able to laugh. I have been extremely busy and preoccupied, so I really appreciate your comment and this bit of laughter.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/21/2019 4:29:00 PM

I'm happy to make you laugh Duke. Hugs