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~*~ ================= " I LOVE YOU, even if you don't mind ... " mouth are kept shut eyes overflowed with myriad driblets of tears no words came out no single phoneme is heard "QUIESCENCE" ~~~ filled the cage of our "LINKAGE" this feeling of passion and love this heart overlaid with warmth this mind crowded with your "NAME" this being subjugated by your "SMILES" but until now, I am still in SILENCE because until now, "YOU" and "I" can't be together ... "YOU and I are walking in different trodden paths of LOVE" ... and still until now, "YOU and I are running in opposites" ... ~~~ how I wish, I can say this HEARTSTRINGS jailed in my deepest "ME" ~*~ ============================================= *-* jun-jun villanueva

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/11/2011 6:11:00 AM
jun-jun congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 9/11/2011 5:08:00 AM
jun-jun, congratulations on your win in Michael's contest ;)
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Date: 9/10/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's contest. Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR
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Date: 9/10/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congratulationss!!! I enjoyed it then, enjoyed it just now ^_^
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Date: 9/10/2011 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2011 3:34:00 AM
A sweet and touching poem, Jun-Jun. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2011 7:00:00 PM
Wonderfully mysterious but profound writing. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:32:00 PM
CONGRATS JUN-JUN ON YOUR GREAT BIG WIN WITH THIS MONUMENTAL POETRY MY FRIEND..SO DEEPLY TOUCHING..LUV..
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Date: 9/9/2011 4:43:00 PM
Thank you for this moving heart felt write and congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest.... always with luv Michael
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Date: 9/4/2011 10:31:00 AM
what a tremor this love song creates; truly poignant and well-scribed, jun... hope it's just a poem; pianful and beautiful! :) huggs, nette
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